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~*A Moment*~

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StarrGazer
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0 posted 03-07-2000 12:02 PM       View Profile for StarrGazer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for StarrGazer


If only for a moment, I have  felt  true  love
And nothing can take that away, not even God above
If only for a moment, I have  felt  pure  joy
Not even all the pain in the world can destroy
If only for a moment, I can call you mine
Then that moment will have to last until the end of    time
If only for a moment, I've floated on a cloud
I will never  regret it, regret is not allowed
If only for a moment, you belong to me
Even though I know someday I'll have to set you free
If only for a moment, our souls are joined as one
That moment  will have  to last  until my breath is    done
© Copyright 2000 Shan Crider - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 03-07-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Your poem speaks to the heart of those who have seen the beauty of love and the pain of having to let it go.  I loved it.
hailfellow
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2 posted 03-07-2000 01:30 PM       View Profile for hailfellow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hailfellow

This kind of answers the age old question "Is it better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all?"  Your poem has helped me see things in a new light.  Thanks.  'Twas truly an excellent poem.  Good job.

 hailfellow
"If life had no sense and I had to choose nonsense, then I too should consider this the most sensible nonsense."
~Nietzsche
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3 posted 03-07-2000 07:24 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Good one!
Janet Marie
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4 posted 03-07-2000 07:56 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

STARR this is excellent  i love the part about no regrets...
reminds me of an OLD song...
"a little bit of love is better than no love, even a sad love is better than no love at all"
bj thomas

boy did I just date myself with that one  LOL
take care, janet marie

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
janet marie

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 03-08-2000 02:33 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Loved the poem, it was very passionate!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


StarrGazer
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6 posted 03-08-2000 09:57 AM       View Profile for StarrGazer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for StarrGazer

Thank you all for your comments and glad ya liked it  

 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~
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