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~*A Moment*~
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~*A Moment*~ |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas 
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If only for a moment, I have felt true love And nothing can take that away, not even God above If only for a moment, I have felt pure joy Not even all the pain in the world can destroy If only for a moment, I can call you mine Then that moment will have to last until the end of time If only for a moment, I've floated on a cloud I will never regret it, regret is not allowed If only for a moment, you belong to me Even though I know someday I'll have to set you free If only for a moment, our souls are joined as one That moment will have to last until my breath is done |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Your poem speaks to the heart of those who have seen the beauty of love and the pain of having to let it go. I loved it. |
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hailfellow Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 28 |
This kind of answers the age old question "Is it better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all?" Your poem has helped me see things in a new light. Thanks. 'Twas truly an excellent poem. Good job. hailfellow "If life had no sense and I had to choose nonsense, then I too should consider this the most sensible nonsense." ~Nietzsche |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good one! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
STARR this is excellent i love the part about no regrets... reminds me of an OLD song... "a little bit of love is better than no love, even a sad love is better than no love at all" bj thomas boy did I just date myself with that one LOL take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Loved the poem, it was very passionate!  "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Thank you all for your comments and glad ya liked it ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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