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Color My World (For The Crayon King)

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Rapunsel
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0 posted 03-07-2000 11:30 AM       View Profile for Rapunsel   Email Rapunsel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rapunsel

Dearest King
I bow before you now
giving myself
in offering
to you

Let my body
be your canvas
and fingerpaint color
into my black and white world

Paint me blue
as your eyes
in summer light
and the skies
on a cloudless day

Green
as the vines
my arms will become
to cling to you
and as the grass
I will lay you down upon

Gold
as the crown
placed upon your head
and the sunlight
that streams
in the window at day break

And paint me red
as my heart
that beats for you
and for the passion
you envoke in me

Oh dearest King
create in me
a masterpiece
as you color my world
with your love






[This message has been edited by Rapunsel (edited 03-07-2000).]
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mete out
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since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
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1 posted 03-07-2000 11:48 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

This is a wonderful first post....so visual and emotive.
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Nurse Crachet
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since 09-27-1999
Posts 321
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2 posted 03-07-2000 12:30 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

She desires you to color her world
in colors of natures earth,
she desires you to color
in all her self worth.
I desire only you
to reach out
and see
me.
Danny Holloway
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since 01-15-2000
Posts 2072
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3 posted 03-07-2000 06:09 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Very nice poem and the colors are a nice touch.
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Dr.Moose1
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since 09-05-99
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Bewilderment , USA


4 posted 03-07-2000 06:15 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Whoa...King !!!
You're getting to be quite the Alpha Male around here .Best luck to ya buddy !
Doc
Andrew Scott
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since 06-24-99
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Redlands,CA,USA


5 posted 03-07-2000 08:19 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Rapunsel you've got some fine hair
And all the right curve from here to there
But Red is my color
The crayon box full
Her's is the only shade for which I care
Rapunsel your words call to me
Like the siren of the great see
But I'm tied to the mast
Anchored to my love
Upon Red's shore is where I wish to be
 
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