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Inducement of benign
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Inducement of benign The opiate tranquility, Fills my pipe of ire. The subtle of futility, Dissipates desire. It curls in disappearing smoke. It layers time and awe. It shrouds me in a warming cloak, It soothes away the gnaw. Devolves away the hurt and pain. Narcotic and a door. It hangs away my full disdain. It smokes away the bore I see the world upon a stage, To be or not to be. It takes away the feel of age. The mirror, what I see. It suffers me my time benign, Into the soothe of dark align. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very creative, Sy! I love it!  Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You're one awesome poet, my friend! Corinne |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*Humbly bows to the Master of Poetry* Excellent job Seymore |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thank you for the creative. *L* Corinne. Thank you for the awesome. *L* Hoot, Form one poet to another, thank you. *L* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Can I have some of that tranquility...comes at quite a cost? Another wonderful poem, Sy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, You can have all you want, Thank you *L* |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Whatever you're smokin', Sy... You should have more of it....  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, I'm smoking your wonderful comments. *L* |
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