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Inducement of benign

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Seymour Tabin
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Inducement of benign

The opiate tranquility,
Fills my pipe of ire.
The subtle of futility,
Dissipates desire.

It curls in disappearing smoke.
It layers time and awe.  
It shrouds me in a warming cloak,
It soothes away the gnaw.

Devolves away the hurt and pain.
Narcotic and a door.
It hangs away my full disdain.
It smokes away the bore

I see the world upon a stage,
To be or not to be.
It takes away the feel of age.
The mirror, what I see.

It suffers me my time benign,
Into the soothe of dark align.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-07-2000 11:23 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very creative, Sy! I love it!  

Denise
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You're one awesome poet, my friend!

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*Humbly bows to the Master of Poetry* Excellent job Seymore  
Seymour Tabin
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Denise,
Thank you for the creative. *L*

Corinne.
Thank you for the awesome. *L*

Hoot,
Form one poet to another, thank you. *L*
Martie
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Can I have some of that tranquility...comes at quite a cost?  Another wonderful poem, Sy.
Seymour Tabin
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Martie,
You can have all you want, Thank you *L*
Nan
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Whatever you're smokin', Sy... You should have more of it....
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 03-09-2000 10:10 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
I'm smoking your wonderful comments. *L*
 
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