How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #6 Archive
 DINKs
 1 2 3 4
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

DINKs

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Local Rebel
Member Ascendant
since 12-21-1999
Posts 5742
Southern Abstentia


0 posted 03-07-2000 09:19 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Local Rebel

Dinks
My friends are
Double incomed and
No kids
Proud not to have any
They dote over puppies
And antiques as old
As their attitudes have become

She looks like a kid
My kid sister
Though we had different parents
My kid sister nonetheless
The scar on her neck
Unnoticeable an hour after
Hallway hugs and
She looks so good
To have beaten the cancer
That ate her

Better than she ever had

And the hosts
I hugged the former
Hip twister harder
Than my own brother

But they dink
And dink
And write flowery words
For Border's afternoons
To read and
Pat pat
It's good I know
But it dinks

Dinking jaws drop
As I tell them I am
Divorcing
Too un-republican
I know
It dinks, not more
Suprising than
That I ever got married though
They dink at me

And the other one
The user
Didn't show
Until lunch the next day
Disconnected
We connected
In our disconnection
He looks used up
But the same
Disconnected from ex
From son
From the universe

Disconnected
Like me

It dinks



 Hate is a dead thing. Who of you would be a tomb? -Kahlil Gibran
© Copyright 2000 Local Rebel - All Rights Reserved
Corazon
Senior Member
since 02-02-2000
Posts 1301


1 posted 03-07-2000 09:24 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

wow what a commentary, what a view you have shared....like this...good stuff my friend  
mete out
Member
since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


2 posted 03-07-2000 09:37 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Rebel,
This poem is great.
Cast aside societies stupidities and live YOUR life, not THEIRS.
I welcome your words with an open mind....fantastic.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.
devina
Member Elite
since 10-28-1999
Posts 3189
Northern Cali


3 posted 03-07-2000 12:37 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I think it's my turn to say, that I enjoyed this peice of you!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
RainbowGirl
Member Elite
since 07-31-99
Posts 3167
United Kingdom


4 posted 03-07-2000 03:36 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Good luck sweetheart, you'll be just fine..

HUSG

 I dropped a tear in the ocean
when it is found, I will stop loving you...
Local Rebel will be notified of replies
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #6 >> DINKs Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors