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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-03-07 08:55 AM


Just For Me

The absolute beauty
of spring
woke up within
my yard.
The birds were
singing
squirrels were
dancing,
flowers starting
to bloom.

My eyes were
astonished
to see it all together
at once.
Like a Broadway show
with live
actors in synchronicity
performing...
Just for me.


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-03-07 09:59 AM


LostDreamer~
Those little spring critters
are just popping up everywhere.
Lovely of you to share.
I love it.
~*Marge*~


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hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-03-07 10:22 AM


I love the way you looked at this. Makes me see things in a whole new light  
Denise
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3 posted 2000-03-07 11:08 AM


Delightful, Gloria!

Denise

Honeybee
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4 posted 2000-03-07 11:16 AM


  

Excellent poem.  You have made something that we all take for granted into something fresh and beautiful.  I love the way you crafted this piece.  Whenever I gaze out my window from now on, I will always see spring in a new light and think of your poem.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
5 posted 2000-03-08 09:43 PM


I Thank You all very much for your wonderful compliments, I was in my glory when I looked out into the yard and saw the scene being played out.I'm glad I was able to share with you.
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