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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 03-07-2000 08:55 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Just For Me

The absolute beauty
of spring
woke up within
my yard.
The birds were
singing
squirrels were
dancing,
flowers starting
to bloom.

My eyes were
astonished
to see it all together
at once.
Like a Broadway show
with live
actors in synchronicity
performing...
Just for me.

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1 posted 03-07-2000 09:59 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LostDreamer~
Those little spring critters
are just popping up everywhere.
Lovely of you to share.
I love it.
~*Marge*~


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hoot_owl_rn
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I love the way you looked at this. Makes me see things in a whole new light  
Denise
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Delightful, Gloria!

Denise
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Excellent poem.  You have made something that we all take for granted into something fresh and beautiful.  I love the way you crafted this piece.  Whenever I gaze out my window from now on, I will always see spring in a new light and think of your poem.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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5 posted 03-08-2000 09:43 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I Thank You all very much for your wonderful compliments, I was in my glory when I looked out into the yard and saw the scene being played out.I'm glad I was able to share with you.
 
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