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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
a touch a hug so simple yet so complex conveys so much yet is so little showing I care I love I grief I care without it we die with it we dare to dream we hope to love we need this gift yet are afraid to ask for it we feel we will be seen as weak as a baby yet a baby ask for a touch and hug all the time and look what they grow into a human |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Eyes, So beautiful. It made me all warm inside and, I'm not ashamed to say, it made me well up. This is what poetry, to me, is all about, displays emotion and makes the reader feel emotion. Well done. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Hugs are always great, both to give and receive..  HUGS I dropped a tear in the ocean when it is found, I will stop loving you... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts...I know the value of a hug. James |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
nice poem eyes it was nicely said and it makes me want a hug lol. to often people dont understand what their actions really mean. Thanx for sharing i hope to read more of your stuff (((((hugz))))) |
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