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eyesplus2
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0 posted 03-07-2000 06:45 AM       View Profile for eyesplus2   Email eyesplus2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for eyesplus2


         a touch

         a hug

        so simple

       yet so complex

       conveys so much

       yet is so little

       showing I care

          I love

          I grief

          I care

        without it we die

       with it we dare to dream

         we hope to love

         we need this gift

       yet are afraid to ask for it

       we feel we will be seen as weak

            as a baby

yet a baby ask for a touch and hug all the time
                  
        and look what they grow into

              a human
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mete out
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1 posted 03-07-2000 10:12 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Eyes,
So beautiful.
It made me all warm inside and, I'm not ashamed to say, it made me well up.
This is what poetry, to me, is all about, displays emotion and makes the reader feel emotion.
Well done.


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RainbowGirl
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2 posted 03-07-2000 03:26 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Hugs are always great, both to give and receive..

HUGS

 I dropped a tear in the ocean
when it is found, I will stop loving you...
JamesMichael
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3 posted 03-07-2000 03:31 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice thoughts...I know the value of a hug. James
just_another_fe
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4 posted 03-07-2000 03:49 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

nice poem eyes it was nicely said and it makes me want a hug lol. to often people dont understand what their actions really mean. Thanx for sharing i hope to read more of your stuff  (((((hugz)))))
 
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