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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-03-07 06:13 AM


FRIENDSHIP

I’m so unsure of what to say
To help you out is all I pray
Still I’m unsure of what to do
I’ll try to help get you through

With listening ears and eyes wide open
And a few  words softly spoken
Hopefully I can help show the way
One thing for sure I’m here to stay

A friend to talk to and lend a hand
A friend who will always try to understand
I will not judge or critisize
Try to see things through your eyes

I may not have answers at the ready
And my outstretched hand may not always be steady  
One thing I know will always be true
Is my loving friendship given to you

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 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 03-07-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-03-07 07:42 AM


Tracie~
Just beautiful.
No one could ask for more
in a friend.  
~*Marge*~



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Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 2000-03-07 08:49 AM


Your poem was the essence of true friendship. You made me long for a friend like that and strive to be a friend like that to someone.  You made me feel your words. A beautiful poem.
Danny Holloway
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3 posted 2000-03-07 11:25 AM


Very nice poem and truly defines what a friend is.
I hope I have some friends like you!

RufffRyder
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4 posted 2000-03-08 12:51 PM


Hello you,
I just wanted to say that you will always be a sweety in my book.
I have,and will continue to read and enjoy your writings.
This is another excellent read (mommy)
Take care u  

tracie66
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5 posted 2000-03-08 02:52 AM


Dear all thank you for your beautiful replies, you are all friends to me LoL tracie


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Michael
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6 posted 2000-03-08 02:56 AM


Tracie, this poem is "everything" a person could want in a friend.  I could feel the genuineness of your words.  A very warming gift your friendship is and you've expressed it beautifully.

Michael

tracie66
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7 posted 2000-03-08 02:59 AM


Bad boy you better tell me if you're mess'n with me   I think you know what I mean
If you understand my message please reply with just a wink (mommy)tee hee
If you don't forget everything I said


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

tracie66
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8 posted 2000-03-08 03:02 AM


Michael just seeing that you have read this means alot to me.
I thank you very much my friend  
Tracie


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

tracie66
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10 posted 2000-03-08 03:46 AM


Bad boy you just crack me up, I won't say what I realy said when I saw your message it wasn't pretty. All I can say is I have missed you so. Thanks LoL always Tracie oops (Mommy)  
By the way a BIG HUG from you will do anytime
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 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 03-08-2000).]

First__Knight
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11 posted 2000-03-08 03:52 AM


What friend could ask for more than this.  You have expressed it well what we all should be to one another we call friends.  
RufffRyder
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12 posted 2000-03-08 03:58 AM


Hey Mommy,
Watch my page,cause Im gunna write one just for you...not sure when but I will.
Ya know I`ll get booted again,Dont ya?
No big if so.....I`ll be back...lmbo
Your are now and always will be my favorite mommy in Passion  

tracie66
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13 posted 2000-03-08 04:22 AM


First-knight thankyou for your great reply  
it is much appreciated.

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

tracie66
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14 posted 2000-03-08 04:27 AM


Oops ignore this I didn't think it worked (sorry)
Hey now I'm    
one thing to say don't you ever leave me again things just arn't the same  
you made my day you know and the magic may have dissapeared but not the spirit LoL< !signature-->

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 03-08-2000).]

tracie66
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15 posted 2000-03-08 04:30 AM


Hey now I'm  
One thing to say please don't leave me ever again, things just wern't the same  
The magic may have dissapeared but not the spirit LoL




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