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Of chaos and guilt

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Tan
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0 posted 03-07-2000 03:38 AM       View Profile for Tan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tan


In this constant chaos forms a light
But even too much light is blinding to the eye
As beauty can be a deceiving sight
So can welcome clothe scorn and spite

In this everlasting guilt smiles a name
Its worth more then earth, life and breath
Radiant, silent and won't harm for pain
For you can't cheat love and you can't cheat death
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Michael
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1 posted 03-07-2000 04:57 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Amen.   Short, strong and to the point!  Well done and well said.

Michael

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I agree with Michael.  I hope I get to see more of this, it's a breath of fresh air.

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
 
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