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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-03-07 01:53 AM



               Loves greatest need
                  to be shared

              loves greatest joy
                to be returned

                loves greatest hope
                  to bring joy

               loves greatest dream
               to never be taken lightly

              loves greatest strength
                 its acceptance

               loves greatest weakness
          its fear of not being accepted

                 loves only job
                  to bring joy
                  
                   happiness
                  
             and well being  to  all  
            
              especially the loves
                  
                     Love



[This message has been edited by eyesplus2 (edited 03-07-2000).]

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Michael
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1 posted 2000-03-07 05:29 AM


Well I have a few other adjectives for love but they wouldn't be appropriate here...LOL  Seriously, this is beautiful.  Love is definately different to us all but at the same time very much a shared need that unites us all in its own way.  Wonderful poem.

Michael

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