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Hand on the soul.....

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The Jackal
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hand on the soul
dripping with anger
and sadness untold
speaking for hours
to an empty,dirty room
building the loss
feeling  everything
in bright bold relief
the tomb is the world
leave a little sanity
everywhere
heaven in an eye
rigid....jaded
until the day we die..
© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
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'leave a little sanity everywhere'

That's a great line, Jackal. Well written and very sad.

Denise
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