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bboog
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since 2000-02-29
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0 posted 2000-03-06 09:27 PM


Wordless
By bboog

A finger in front
Of your lips.
A nod or shake
Of the head.
A handshake.
A wave.
A hug.
A kiss.
Or even an “O” made
With your thumb and finger.
Sometimes,
No matter what words
You don’t speak,
Your eyes smile
and tell me
I love you.


© Copyright 2000 Robert Boog - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-06 09:59 PM


Sometimes no words are necessary, so true!
This is beautiful, bboog!

Denise

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
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2 posted 2000-03-06 10:10 PM


I agree. The sentiment within this piece is wonderful, and with minimal words (appropriately, I might add) you've expressed it well.
Songbird
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3 posted 2000-03-07 12:36 PM


This is beautiful, it leaves a lot to the imagination, but says so much in so few lines.
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