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jeremyc
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since 2000-02-21
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0 posted 2000-03-06 08:09 PM


life, at times, seems so unfair
that i finally found something so rare
something some people spend a lifetime trying to find
something, or someone, that never leaves my mind
a feeling that i'm sure is true love
sent to me from God, in heaven above

but why, then, if this love is so true
does it seem that i never get to be with you
sure, we're always together in my mind, and in my heart
but in reality, we're far, and soon to be farther apart
why, when i did nothing and i being tortured so
how much i love you and miss you, i doubt you could ever know

and i wish that the time would never come when i must go
but this situation is not in my control
it seems as if i am falling deeper into infinite abyss
never did i think of how much i'd miss your kiss
and whenever 'love' is said, it's you i'll recall
whatever happens, let them say that to you i gave my all

i'm 15, and i must move with my family, and leave a loved one  

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devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
1 posted 2000-03-06 08:24 PM


This is a sad situation, and it's happened to me a few times when I was young...just remember that if it's meant to be, it will be...but you still have your whole life to find out- take advantage of that m'friend!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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