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Passion (Not Stute Related)

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Nurse Crachet
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Passion

I saw the magnitude of ocean strength raging in your eyes
as the mellow moon above was full of life and illuminating
the fragile sandy earth below our captured embrace.

I wanted to body surf your highest crashing tides
and tangle within your strands of seaweed.
I caressed your smooth sandbar softly
as your waves gently rode over me.

I now lay upon your sandy bed
as the rush of your ocean
undertows my emotions
to extreme levels
of passion.
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1 posted 03-06-2000 07:26 PM       Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Rosalind Palafox

I love the way the ocean feels too.  

 "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb
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2 posted 03-06-2000 07:37 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Nurse C~
This is LOVELY ...
and the title is certainly apropos.
The format is WONDERFUL !
By golly, I think I like it !
~*Marge*~


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Nice waves here Nurse C... nothing like the passion of the sea... a depth and intensity beyond measure.
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4 posted 03-06-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I can relate to this passions very easily! This is very beautiful!  

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I thank all of you for reading and responding, the ocean is captivating in itself.
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Passion...one of my favorite subjects  
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Rapunsel, Thanks for reading and responding, and I know about your passion...LOL
 
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