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Nurse Crachet
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0 posted 2000-03-06 07:24 PM


Passion

I saw the magnitude of ocean strength raging in your eyes
as the mellow moon above was full of life and illuminating
the fragile sandy earth below our captured embrace.

I wanted to body surf your highest crashing tides
and tangle within your strands of seaweed.
I caressed your smooth sandbar softly
as your waves gently rode over me.

I now lay upon your sandy bed
as the rush of your ocean
undertows my emotions
to extreme levels
of passion.

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Rosalind Palafox
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1 posted 2000-03-06 07:26 PM


I love the way the ocean feels too.  

 "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-03-06 07:37 PM


Nurse C~
This is LOVELY ...
and the title is certainly apropos.
The format is WONDERFUL !
By golly, I think I like it !
~*Marge*~


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Andrew Scott
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3 posted 2000-03-06 07:49 PM


Nice waves here Nurse C... nothing like the passion of the sea... a depth and intensity beyond measure.
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4 posted 2000-03-06 09:23 PM


I can relate to this passions very easily! This is very beautiful!  

Denise

Nurse Crachet
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5 posted 2000-03-07 07:30 AM


I thank all of you for reading and responding, the ocean is captivating in itself.
Rapunsel
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6 posted 2000-03-07 11:10 AM


Passion...one of my favorite subjects  
Nurse Crachet
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7 posted 2000-03-08 09:10 AM


Rapunsel, Thanks for reading and responding, and I know about your passion...LOL
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