How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #6 Archive
 I Can't Wait
 1 2 3 4 5
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

I Can't Wait

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
teeny_greeny
New Member
since 03-04-2000
[First Post] 6
Canada


0 posted 03-06-2000 05:37 PM       View Profile for teeny_greeny   Email teeny_greeny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teeny_greeny


I can't wait to see you at the start of the day
To visit, say "hi" and be on my way.
You understand me unlike anyone.
When you are near me I always have fun,
The first time we talked, I couldn't believe
I let out my secrets with such trusting ease.
I know I can tell you all of my thoughts
and you'll help me untie the confusing knots.
You tell no lies, speak only the truth.
Never treating me like I am a youth.
The first time you told me how you feel
and made me see my dreams are real.
The first time you admitted you wanted me here.
Your arms wrapped around me, your scent lingered near.
Our first deep silence, I could hear your heartbeat.
I felt so calm in your penetrating heat.
You lean over my shoulder, your breath warm on my skin.
No one understands the love that we're in.
When our eyes meet, all else disappears.
I open my soul, you dissolve my fears.
You told me your problems, I offered advice.
We talked until morning 'cause I stayed the night.
You stroke my hair gently, wipe my tears away.
Promising togetherness soon one day.
You sing me to sleep and enter my dreams.
You are with me always, or so it seems.
I bring out your glow, you bring out my shine.
We've shared so many breakthroughs in such a short time.
I can't wait until tomorrow, I'll see you in a day.
I'll visit you, say "hi" and then be on my way.

-dedicated to the love of my life-  


© Copyright 2000 Stephie - All Rights Reserved
CMGrimm
Senior Member
since 02-14-2000
Posts 700
USA


1 posted 03-06-2000 05:41 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Nice first post...and let me be the first to welcome you to Passions...

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
just_another_fe
Senior Member
since 02-05-2000
Posts 504
MICHIGAN


2 posted 03-07-2000 01:14 AM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

first i wanna say welcome to passions...second....WOW this poem was great. i hope your love lasts forever and stays strong   *wishes 4 everything this poem says* good job keep writing ill keep reading...
ps love the name "teeny greeny" lol
tulip
Member
since 07-04-99
Posts 324
unknown


3 posted 03-07-2000 01:48 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

teeny,
I hope you both realize what you have.  Good luck and hold on tight!!!
mete out
Member
since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


4 posted 03-07-2000 04:18 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Tenny Greeny,
This is gorgeous!    
I am about to mail this poem to the love of MY life...so thankyou.
*Welcome to Passions*
I look forward to reading more of your work.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 11-16-1999
Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


5 posted 03-07-2000 07:13 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I think I understand the love you are in...you have found a special one and they have found you.   Don't wait..enjoy every moments.   James
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #6 >> I Can't Wait Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors