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Where Creation Finally Breathes
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Where Creation Finally Breathes |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Where Creation Finally Breathes The flow is so illusive. To scrunch my eyes and push it from my pores is to bruise my skin searching. I’ve tried humming a mantra to the muse only to find silly past fragments that kiss the sound into a sigh. Don’t expect to hear it knocking with thought in delicious anticipation, the flow is so gentle it waits for open doors. You must come around behind it without appearing to be looking, and then walk with it, no walls no time no dimension only this sweet movement that comes from a place that weeps with vision. It is the space where dear freedom takes its first step and creation finally breathes. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Another beautiful poem, Martie! You left me breathless! Nathan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, You always surprise me with the depth of your poems. Excellent. *L* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So that's what I have been doing wrong, I have to sneak up behind it and act like I don't care! Okay, Maybe that will work, I'll give it a try. Soon I will be flooding this place with poetry!  Great poem, Martie! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 03-06-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Martie: This is so peaceful...thank you.. HUSG I dropped a tear in the ocean when it is found, I will stop loving you... |
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