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Magical Moment

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mystery
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0 posted 03-06-2000 04:50 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery


At a distance stands a perfect stranger
All of his life he's been awaiting for me
Walking closer and closer along my path
Did he know that he was approaching his destiny
As we began to cross paths
I felt an urge to look in his eyes
What intentionally started out as a glance
Turned into a locking of pupils
Our eyes had done a dance
While our mind remained stuck in scruples
I couldn't take my view away from from him
Steady strolling but still focused
Picture perfect images of his lips
Saying he knew this would sound bogus
But never does he make these trips
So his arrival served a purpose
And that purpose was I
He felt the connection
While passing me by
His spoken words were true
Because I felt exactly the same
Playing out our feelings like TABOO
But this wasn't a game
If compared to one though
I would have to say LIFE
Because he started out single
And ended up with a wife



Mystery:
My man and I met one night at a social, he took a trip with his friends and never imagined to meet me. The funny thing about it is that it was an unusual feeling as we approached eachother, that night we talked for hours, exchanged numbers and that was the start of a happy, healthy relationship, Magical describes this perfectly.

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Rosalind Palafox
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1 posted 03-06-2000 07:18 PM       Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Rosalind Palafox

Oh that is so lovely to hear! ANd a good poem to follow up with reality.

 "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb
Denise
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2 posted 03-06-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wow! That's wonderful! Great poem about it!

Denise
mystery
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3 posted 03-07-2000 04:28 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery

Thank You for the comments, I'm glad that the both of you enjoyed this poem.
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4 posted 03-07-2000 07:18 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wonderful story...told in a good poem.
Marina
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5 posted 03-07-2000 08:55 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

I like this one Mystery. Well done.

Marina
 
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