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Open Poetry #6

Magical Moment

mystery
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since 2000-02-21

Posts 79

0 posted 2000-03-06 04:50 PM

At a distance stands a perfect stranger
All of his life he's been awaiting for me
Walking closer and closer along my path
Did he know that he was approaching his destiny
As we began to cross paths
I felt an urge to look in his eyes
What intentionally started out as a glance
Turned into a locking of pupils
Our eyes had done a dance
While our mind remained stuck in scruples
I couldn't take my view away from from him
Steady strolling but still focused
Picture perfect images of his lips
Saying he knew this would sound bogus
But never does he make these trips
So his arrival served a purpose
And that purpose was I
He felt the connection
While passing me by
His spoken words were true
Because I felt exactly the same
Playing out our feelings like TABOO
But this wasn't a game
If compared to one though
I would have to say LIFE
Because he started out single
And ended up with a wife

Mystery:
My man and I met one night at a social, he took a trip with his friends and never imagined to meet me. The funny thing about it is that it was an unusual feeling as we approached eachother, that night we talked for hours, exchanged numbers and that was the start of a happy, healthy relationship, Magical describes this perfectly.

Rosalind Palafox

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1 posted 2000-03-06 07:18 PM

Oh that is so lovely to hear! ANd a good poem to follow up with reality.

"Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-03-06 09:48 PM

Wow! That's wonderful! Great poem about it!

Denise

mystery
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since 2000-02-21

Posts 79

3 posted 2000-03-07 04:28 PM

Thank You for the comments, I'm glad that the both of you enjoyed this poem.

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2000-03-07 07:18 PM

Wonderful story...told in a good poem.

Marina
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

5 posted 2000-03-07 08:55 PM

I like this one Mystery. Well done.

Marina

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