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Close Enough (A ladies only poem)

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Nurse Crachet
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0 posted 03-06-2000 02:03 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Close Enough

Sitting in the crowded audience
close enough
to grab a distant glimpse.

They slowly came on center stage
close enough
to desire as they creatively disengage.

Ten gorgeous men performing
close enough
to have this mind transforming.

Women drooling falling at their feet
close enough
to reach out and carefully greet.

Lusting eyes accompanying mine
close enough
to gather together and entwine.

The guy's are done show's over
close enough
to luck as a four leaf clover.



[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 03-06-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Nurse Crachet - All Rights Reserved
Mike
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1 posted 03-06-2000 02:18 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Is that supposed to be luck or pluck in the last line?    sorry.. delete...delete...
Nurse Crachet
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2 posted 03-06-2000 02:22 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Mike, ROTFLMAO I like your concept, but I think I'll stay with luck. Thanks for reading.
Marilyn
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3 posted 03-06-2000 04:41 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

oh I like pluck better myself!! Whoo Hoo!! Good work Nurse.  
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4 posted 03-06-2000 04:48 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Marilyn, I truly do too, but I think I'd have a hard time finding myself again if it were to go that far, with that many...LOL
Thanks for reading and enjoying.
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5 posted 03-06-2000 08:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is great! Those four leaf clovers are very rare indeed, aren't they?!

Denise
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ROFL@ Mike's comment. Hey Mike, what's ya doing here anyway. It said for ladies only  

This is cute Nurse Cratchet...I kind of like the pluck in there too. Good poem  
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7 posted 03-07-2000 07:35 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

dsnyder, Thanks for reading and your kind response

Hoot_owl_rn, Thanks for reading, glad you liked it, and I think Mike may have been reading and responding as I was editing the title to say for ladies only.

Sorry Mike, but you actually made the poem more fun for that I say Thanks again.
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8 posted 03-07-2000 03:42 PM       View Profile for Wicked Witch of the East   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wicked Witch of the East

Nurse Cratchet my pretty, I hear Mike's on the loose,
I'll call out my monkeys, they'll cook his lame goose,
He ought not be readin', poems for ladies,
We'll send his tail end, straight down to Hades,
Into this poem, he ought not to have ducked,
Before said and done, he'll wish he'd been plucked.

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9 posted 03-08-2000 09:04 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Well Witchy poo,
Mike was no problem
he added humor to the scene
so you leave him alone
you hear.
I thought the Witch
of the East was the nice one
now which one of us
is mixed up?
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10 posted 03-08-2000 09:28 AM       View Profile for Wicked Witch of the East   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wicked Witch of the East

You think of my sister, she comes from the west,
But just so's no question, I am the best,
For Glenda's a prude, she calls me a prune,
Mom liked her best, she's just a buffoon.
Nurse Crachet
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11 posted 03-08-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

I need to say sorry
for being mistaken
both the Witches
from the East and West
are mean.
please forgive
this crazy nurse
sometimes she has not
all her faculties.
 
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