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Close Enough (A ladies only poem)
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Close Enough (A ladies only poem) |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Close Enough Sitting in the crowded audience close enough to grab a distant glimpse. They slowly came on center stage close enough to desire as they creatively disengage. Ten gorgeous men performing close enough to have this mind transforming. Women drooling falling at their feet close enough to reach out and carefully greet. Lusting eyes accompanying mine close enough to gather together and entwine. The guy's are done show's over close enough to luck as a four leaf clover. [This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 03-06-2000).] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Is that supposed to be luck or pluck in the last line? sorry.. delete...delete... |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Mike, ROTFLMAO I like your concept, but I think I'll stay with luck. Thanks for reading. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
oh I like pluck better myself!! Whoo Hoo!! Good work Nurse.  |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Marilyn, I truly do too, but I think I'd have a hard time finding myself again if it were to go that far, with that many...LOL Thanks for reading and enjoying. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great! Those four leaf clovers are very rare indeed, aren't they?! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFL@ Mike's comment. Hey Mike, what's ya doing here anyway. It said for ladies only  This is cute Nurse Cratchet...I kind of like the pluck in there too. Good poem  |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
dsnyder, Thanks for reading and your kind response Hoot_owl_rn, Thanks for reading, glad you liked it, and I think Mike may have been reading and responding as I was editing the title to say for ladies only. Sorry Mike, but you actually made the poem more fun for that I say Thanks again. |
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Wicked Witch of the East Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 69 |
Nurse Cratchet my pretty, I hear Mike's on the loose, I'll call out my monkeys, they'll cook his lame goose, He ought not be readin', poems for ladies, We'll send his tail end, straight down to Hades, Into this poem, he ought not to have ducked, Before said and done, he'll wish he'd been plucked. |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Well Witchy poo, Mike was no problem he added humor to the scene so you leave him alone you hear. I thought the Witch of the East was the nice one now which one of us is mixed up? |
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Wicked Witch of the East Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 69 |
You think of my sister, she comes from the west, But just so's no question, I am the best, For Glenda's a prude, she calls me a prune, Mom liked her best, she's just a buffoon. |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
I need to say sorry for being mistaken both the Witches from the East and West are mean. please forgive this crazy nurse sometimes she has not all her faculties. |
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