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Midnight Allure

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mystery
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0 posted 03-06-2000 01:03 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery

Ladies night out
And we are all dressed to kill
With tight fitting suits
And platforms for heels
Natural eyecatchers
As we enter the club
Strobelights reflect off our bodies
Like we are mirror hotties
Women stare into us
And wish to see themselves
Gentlemen attracted to us
Like a magnetic strip
The attention won't cease
We look good and they feel good
From the kinetic energy that we release
Center floor dancing
As we put on a show
Gyrating to the beat
Enticing with our rhythmic motions
Making everbody want to dance
Laughing the night away
Recapturing our youth
Occasional split-ups
But we still remain aloof
When the party is over
We reconnect again
To exit the club
Wishing our fun would never end

MYSTERY


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mystery
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1 posted 03-06-2000 01:23 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery

This past friday, myself and a few of my friend went out for a night in town. Occasionally we all get together and hang out for old times sake. This friday was different then most. We all looked extrememly beautiful and our attitudes showed. We possessed a glow that lit up the room and the attention we received proved that we were stars in the eyes of the beholders. Friday night inspired me to write this poem, and I want to dedicate it to my close friends, who were with me to share the moment.
Ii hope you enjoy reading it just as much as I enjoyed celebrating it.
busylisa_ca
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2 posted 03-06-2000 03:54 PM       View Profile for busylisa_ca   Email busylisa_ca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for busylisa_ca

Mystery,

Thank you firstly for reading my first poem, it was greatly appreciated.  My response to this poem is SELF-ESTEEM. Desn't it feel good to look good and have a good time with the people you care about?  Not mention, I always feel better when I have a night out on the town!!!!
 
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