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busylisa_ca
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since 2000-03-01
Posts 39


0 posted 2000-03-06 12:18 PM


This poem explains a transitional time in my life.

Life Decisions

Lingering thoughts of
hopes and dreams,
happiness and security.

The ground below my feet
is moving, making it difficult
to stand or step forward.
Unsure of tomorrow
and worried about the future.

Nothing is a life long promise.
No sense of stability,
no love to feel,
only confusion.

Soon I will open
THE door
to my future,
But I don't know what
the future holds for me.

I've made it through difficult times before,
what makes this point in my life
build a solid brick wall
Unbraekable and
Too high to look over.
In time, I will break down the wall,
And walk the path to my future.

busylisa

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2000-03-06 12:36 PM


Yes busylisa, this I believe is something we can all relate to...well put!

 ~shadows dance by the light within~


Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-03-06 09:03 PM


Yes, I'm sure we can all relate to this. Decisions can be very scarey. Nice poem.

Denise

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