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Life Decisions

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busylisa_ca
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0 posted 03-06-2000 12:18 PM       View Profile for busylisa_ca   Email busylisa_ca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for busylisa_ca

This poem explains a transitional time in my life.

Life Decisions

Lingering thoughts of
hopes and dreams,
happiness and security.

The ground below my feet
is moving, making it difficult
to stand or step forward.
Unsure of tomorrow
and worried about the future.

Nothing is a life long promise.
No sense of stability,
no love to feel,
only confusion.

Soon I will open
THE door
to my future,
But I don't know what
the future holds for me.

I've made it through difficult times before,
what makes this point in my life
build a solid brick wall
Unbraekable and
Too high to look over.
In time, I will break down the wall,
And walk the path to my future.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 03-06-2000 12:36 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

Yes busylisa, this I believe is something we can all relate to...well put!

 ~shadows dance by the light within~

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2 posted 03-06-2000 09:03 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, I'm sure we can all relate to this. Decisions can be very scarey. Nice poem.

Denise
 
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