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Nurse Crachet
Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

0 posted 2000-03-06 11:50 AM

The Answer I Quest

One, two, three oh dear
I'm not sure where
to go from here.

step left, step right
I'm not sure
of anything
tonight.

Is the road long,
or it short
do I conquer
or do I abort?

Do I stay or do I go?
For the answer
I quest
only you
know.

[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 03-06-2000).]

busylisa_ca
Junior Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 39

1 posted 2000-03-06 11:57 AM

Nurse, nice simple poem. I like your viewpoint on the issue at hand.

busylisa

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-03-06 08:07 PM

Very nicely done, Nurse! Sometimes life can be confusing, the best we can do sometimes is guess.

Denise

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

3 posted 2000-03-06 08:24 PM

Where ever you go
There you are
To left or right
Make your path as you will
For those who follow
Will seek your light

Nurse Crachet
Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

4 posted 2000-03-07 07:57 AM

busylisa, thanks for reading and enjoying

dsnyder, thanks for reading, sometimes we guess wrong.

Andrew,

I am but a shadow glowing
flickering to be a light
to guide and be guided
to paths of unknown
destiny's emergence
before us
as clouds of wonder.

The steps be little ones
the roads are long
but I shall conquer
all of them
step by step
within my shadows glow.

Rapunsel
New Member

since 2000-02-24

Posts 9

5 posted 2000-03-07 11:05 AM

I'm sure the king will show you the way Nurse if only you will follow his lead

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2000-03-07 11:09 AM

Nurse,
Cute poem, good words, well done.

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

7 posted 2000-03-07 11:10 AM

I loved this piece....simple and deep.

Nurse Crachet
Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 318
They know where I am!

8 posted 2000-03-08 09:15 AM

Rapunsel, I follow his every lead and then some, thanks for reading.

Seymour, Thank you very kindly Sir.

Butterfly, Thank you very much.

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

9 posted 2000-03-08 10:26 AM

Cool poem; BADASS title!

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