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The Answer I Quest

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Nurse Crachet
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They know where I am!


0 posted 03-06-2000 11:50 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nurse Crachet

The Answer I Quest

One, two, three oh dear
I'm not sure where
to go from here.

step left, step right
I'm not sure
of anything
tonight.

Is the road long,
or it short
do I conquer
or do I abort?

Do I stay or do I go?
For the answer
I quest
only you
know.



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busylisa_ca
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1 posted 03-06-2000 11:57 AM       View Profile for busylisa_ca   Email busylisa_ca   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for busylisa_ca

Nurse, nice simple poem.  I like your viewpoint on the issue at hand.

busylisa
Denise
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2 posted 03-06-2000 08:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nicely done, Nurse! Sometimes life can be confusing, the best we can do sometimes is guess.

Denise
Andrew Scott
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3 posted 03-06-2000 08:24 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Where ever you go
There you are
To left or right
Make your path as you will
For those who follow
Will seek your light

Nurse Crachet
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4 posted 03-07-2000 07:57 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

busylisa, thanks for reading and enjoying

dsnyder, thanks for reading, sometimes we guess wrong.

Andrew,

I am but a shadow glowing
flickering to be a light
to guide and be guided
to paths of unknown
destiny's emergence
before us
as clouds of wonder.

The steps be little ones
the roads are long
but I shall conquer
all of them
step by step
within my shadows glow.
Rapunsel
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5 posted 03-07-2000 11:05 AM       View Profile for Rapunsel   Email Rapunsel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rapunsel

I'm sure the king will show you the way Nurse if only you will follow his lead
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 03-07-2000 11:09 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nurse,
Cute poem, good words, well done.
Butterflies_dont_cry
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7 posted 03-07-2000 11:10 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

I loved this piece....simple and deep.
Nurse Crachet
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8 posted 03-08-2000 09:15 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Rapunsel, I follow his every lead and then some, thanks for reading.

Seymour, Thank you very kindly Sir.

Butterfly, Thank you very much.
Christopher
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9 posted 03-08-2000 10:26 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Cool poem; BADASS title!
 
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