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Love's Potion
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Love's Potion |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Love’s Potion In love’s purity The brush of fingertips says we care In sync and fused the perfect pair Souls to each other we bare In love’s lust Our bodies erotically entwined Shameless soft skin in ties that bind Making love with heart, soul, and mind In love’s heart We feel but one emotion Our rings the symbol of our devotion Since having drunk love’s potion Marina Feb 29/2000 |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Marina, this is very nice. "We feel but one emotion". Well said. Good poetic style I feel. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina. . . you've been reading my mind. . . And I have some of that potion right here with me. . . would you like a taste? --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, this reads beautifully. and I really like the style that you use here. Parker |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Gotta have some of that Love potion. Lovely writing. James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Danny, thank-you Sven: A taste of your love potion eh....sounds very tempting. James: thank you, this style is a little different. James: All you have to do is ask! Marina [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 03-06-2000).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was just plain GOOD, I do think I'll have to order a few bottles!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marina~ This is lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
devina,If had plenty of these bottles I wouldn't need to dream! but If I did I certainly share! Marge: thank you, such a complaint coming from you. Marina |
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