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Love's Potion

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Marina
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Love’s Potion


In love’s purity
The brush of fingertips says we care
In sync and fused the perfect pair
Souls to each other we bare


In love’s lust
Our bodies erotically entwined
Shameless soft skin in ties that bind
Making love with heart, soul, and mind


In love’s heart
We feel but one emotion
Our rings the symbol of our devotion
Since having drunk love’s potion


Marina Feb 29/2000


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Danny Holloway
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1 posted 03-06-2000 10:46 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Marina, this is very nice. "We feel but one emotion".  Well said.  Good poetic style I feel.
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2 posted 03-06-2000 01:20 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Marina. . . you've been reading my mind. . .

And I have some of that potion right here with me. . . would you like a taste?

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Marina, this reads beautifully. and I really like the style that you use here.

Parker
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Gotta have some of that Love potion.  Lovely writing.  James
Marina
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5 posted 03-06-2000 08:27 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Danny, thank-you

Sven: A taste of your love potion eh....sounds very tempting.

James: thank you, this style is a little different.

James: All you have to do is ask!

Marina


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This was just plain GOOD, I do think I'll have to order a few bottles!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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Marina~
This is lovely.
~*Marge*~


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Marina
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8 posted 03-07-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

devina,If had plenty of these bottles I wouldn't need to dream!  but If I did I certainly share!

Marge: thank you, such a complaint coming from you.

Marina
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