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Grandma Doesn't Live Here Anymore

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nona
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Grandma doesn't live here anymore
She's off on some unseen distant shore
This ironed will lady, who knew no bounds
now only utters unintelligible sounds.
That vague blank stare tells you
she's no longer there.
No Grandma doesn't live here anymore
............................nona


 
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mete out
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1 posted 03-06-2000 10:51 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Nona,
The way you expressed such tragedy so eloquently nearly reduced me to tears.
another fantastic piece from you.


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Honeybee
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2 posted 03-06-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

Nona:  I definately had to respond to this piece.  It touched me very deeply because it reminds me of my Grandma, who passed away a few years ago.  A bittersweet poem.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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Touching poem, Nona. It must be very heartbreaking.  

Denise
 
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