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I feel like Captain Kirk

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 03-06-2000 06:39 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

I feel like Capt. Kirk

I don't have anyone new but I sure am trying.
All those feelings I had for you are slowly and surely dying.
Its sad but true you took me for granted.
You made me feel like an alien from some far away planet.

Now I have begun a new journey straight into outer space
the mission is to seek and find my celestial place.
I have become just one more alien heart cruising around
where planets, solar systems and stars abound.

My alien heart is free to roam but it wants to find its worldly home.  
And new adventures will unfold by the minute
as we blast towards a new mysterious planet.
As we make our heavenly search
I'm beginning to feel like Captain Kirk.
Lets get going Capt. so we can explore the final frontier
and as the spaceship maneuvers thru space
Dr. Spock and Scotty assume their place.
Looks like we're all in this together
our broken hearts are getting better.

On moonlit nights we hope and dream for our final destination
that beautiful starlit day when wayworn hearts will depart from this alien nation.
And on that glorious day we will meet the woman to take our heart away.
Beam her up Scotty the woman of my dreams
destiny can only cooperate
with fates intended soulmate.

Finally two weary sojourners begin to share that much needed embrace
as together they rejoin the human race.
A prince and his princess that for so long traveled alone thru time and space
now share the joy of loves embrace.

Jameslee@March6,2000

  


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Severn
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1 posted 03-06-2000 06:44 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

You know - I can almost hear this as a song...

I love the imagery here.



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2 posted 03-06-2000 06:50 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mr. Romantic Heart~  
I love this.

'Beam her up Scotty'

Brilliant.
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 03-06-2000 07:21 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Excellent job on this one, I enjoyed the read.

Just remember to come back
when the journey is complete.
Marilyn
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4 posted 03-06-2000 07:47 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I too enjoyed the imagery in this one. Keep writing, I will keep reading.  
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 03-06-2000 10:24 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

BEAM ME UP SCOTTY  

Jim... I'm sure she's out there somewhere  
just_another_fe
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6 posted 03-07-2000 01:00 AM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

This is so creative. I love it and i know this feelin *steals ur heart* i'll take care of it for you k lol   the right person is out there somewhere......maybe somedwe'll find them
JamesMichael
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7 posted 03-07-2000 07:36 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Severn for your nice comments...it is my goal to write songs...but I am not musically inclined but I will get by with a little help from my friends.
Marge I love your comments...I will sleep good tonight.
Thank you Nurse and I will be back but the journey has just begun.
Marilyn it is my dream to write poetry with lots of imagery.  I thank you for your encouragement.
hoot owl wouldn't that be a dream lovers dream come true if we could only beam our lover to us when our heart was yearning the most?  I think I'll hurry and invent that dream beamer before anyone else does so I can make my first million.  
just another fe you are so encouraging and yes I agree with you forever...someday we will meet the one to take our heart away.   Thanks everyone for your lovely magic carpet ride.   James
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8 posted 03-08-2000 03:05 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

I love Star Trek  

Beyond space and time there is a place where no man (or woman   ) can go unless you let them in......in your heart.  Lead her there with your dreams and there she will stay.  Nice read Jim and best of luck Capt Kirk  

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

JamesMichael
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9 posted 03-08-2000 05:16 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you First Knight for your nice comments.  I have been willing to let many women into my heart and they have not let me into theirs...but my journey continues.  I took a simple small piece of paper and wrote "I love you Lena" on it and gave it to this woman I care for and then I watched her face as she read it, and than she signed on the other side "I Love you" but she used a heart for the love word.  I have it on a picture right above my computer.  This brings joy to my heart.  But imagine the joy when we find that we really do love one another or if not her when I really do find a mutual love.   James
JamesMichael
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10 posted 07-09-2000 07:13 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I was reading the above post and this is four months later and I still have that note from Lena that says I Love You above my computer....I am still waiting and trying...James
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11 posted 11-26-2000 01:01 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Beam me up Scotty...James
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12 posted 09-04-2002 05:07 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Well Lena didn't work out as expected...beam me up Scotty...off for new frontiers...James
 
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