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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
This is a poem that I wrote for a very good friend of mine that was considering suicide quite a while ago. It's dedicated in her name but I won't put that on here. As always, this poem is still in rough draft form. Hope 1993 or 94 I hate my hate I hate my love My life is all One ****ing hell My hate is now My love was then My life is Never ending sin Why try to lie Why not just die Because my life Knows how to try And if I can I'll make it through I'll try so hard To carry you I'll help you live You will not die I will not let you Pass me by My love will rise Beyond despise I will not let you Try to die I will refuse I won't give in I can not let you You are my kin My love holds Never ending powers With it I have Sobbed for hours Through it all I've learned one thing All love goes through This hate that stings You can't escape You hold the knife And if you slice You've lost your life My friend there'll Always Be these days These weeks These months These years This phase But through it all Let go my dear For I'll be here To hold your fear I'll help you through This life long bruise I care so much I can't refuse I feel your fear Though you're not here I love you so My dear,...my dear Do not give up Do not give in Do not let anger Cause you sin If you let sadness Rule your life Then you'll let madness **** your life I hope to God That you won't let This sadness end Your life with death I'll always love I'll always care I never will Release this rare This love I have This love we share This love will always Prove my care As long as Heaven Sings its song You're rest assured My love is strong. |
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AnthonyEV1 Junior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 17St. Charles, IL, USA |
That was an EXCELENT poem you wrote. VERY good.  It's a good one to read, cause I'm sure all of us have either thought of suicide once or more, or at least know someone that has. And it's great that you showed this person that you cared through a poem. |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
You certainly had a very lucky friend to have you rooting for them. A touching poem, full of love and care.  Welcome to Passions. I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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