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0 posted 03-06-2000 04:13 AM       View Profile for MyPenNameIsSam   Email MyPenNameIsSam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MyPenNameIsSam

This is a poem that I wrote for a very good friend of mine that was considering suicide quite a while ago.  It's dedicated in her name but I won't put that on here.  As always, this poem is still in rough draft form.

Hope  1993 or 94

I hate my hate
I hate my love
My life is all
One ****ing hell
My hate is now
My love was then
My life is
Never ending sin
Why try to lie
Why not just die
Because my life
Knows how to try
And if I can
I'll make it through
I'll try so hard
To carry you
I'll help you live
You will not die
I will not let you
Pass me by
My love will rise
Beyond despise
I will not let you
Try to die
I will refuse
I won't give in
I can not let you
You are my kin
My love holds
Never ending powers
With it I have
Sobbed for hours
Through it all
I've learned one thing
All love goes through
This hate that stings
You can't escape
You hold the knife
And if you slice
You've lost your life
My friend there'll
Be these days
These weeks
These months
These years
This phase
But through it all
Let go my dear
For I'll be here
To hold your fear
I'll help you through
This life long bruise
I care so much
I can't refuse
I feel your fear
Though you're not here
I love you so
My dear, dear
Do not give up
Do not give in
Do not let anger
Cause you sin
If you let sadness
Rule your life
Then you'll let madness
**** your life
I hope to God
That you won't let
This sadness end
Your life with death
I'll always love
I'll always care
I never will
Release this rare
This love I have
This love we share
This love will always
Prove my care
As long as Heaven
Sings its song
You're rest assured
My love is strong.
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1 posted 03-06-2000 04:21 AM       View Profile for AnthonyEV1   Email AnthonyEV1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit AnthonyEV1's Home Page   View IP for AnthonyEV1

That was an EXCELENT poem you wrote. VERY good.   It's a good one to read, cause I'm sure all of us have either thought of suicide once or more, or at least know someone that has. And it's great that you showed this person that you cared through a poem.  
mete out
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2 posted 03-06-2000 04:25 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

You certainly had a very lucky friend to have you rooting for them.
A touching poem,  full of love and care.

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