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Deceitful, intriguing, eternally yours

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Tan
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0 posted 03-06-2000 01:27 AM       View Profile for Tan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tan

Never in motion, I move without pause
Unjustified actions yet always with cause
Achieving perfection with infinite flaws
Deceitful, intriguing, eternally yours


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Michael
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1 posted 03-06-2000 01:30 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Short - but intriguing.  love the ending....


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2 posted 03-06-2000 06:23 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

There is so much underlying this piece - I like it! Like Michael I am intrigued.



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life enriches writing'
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SO much said in so few words....there is nothing wrong with being brief at all when your thoughts run deep  
Meadowmuse
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4 posted 03-06-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

The conflicting phrases make this an interesting piece. Enjoyed it.

devina
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5 posted 03-06-2000 09:12 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Short and to the point...very well put!!!

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6 posted 03-06-2000 10:18 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I think it takes great talent to say so much with few words! This is great!!

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7 posted 03-07-2000 06:51 PM       View Profile for Toyy   Email Toyy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toyy

Wow!! Awesome! I love this piece, MORE MORE!!
So short so much!
Gil
 
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