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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
Posts 163
australia

0 posted 2000-03-06 12:56 PM



......A snow flake coming gently to the
ground...unique in every way.........no two the same........a love
unique in every way.......falling gently on you......sparkling on your
heart......not melting like the snowflake...staying on your heart for a
lifetime and more......building....building......growing into an awe
inspiring feeling.......of beauty...wonder .....and  magic.........none
two alike.......warming the two lovers....drawing them
near........making two become one.........joing two hearts into one
unique thing of beauty.....



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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
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1 posted 2000-03-06 02:09 AM


There is a unique beauty to every snowflake.  I found this lovely.


michael

Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
2 posted 2000-03-06 08:34 AM


   Very beautiful, with a unique comparison between a snowflake and love.  Sounds like you are in love?

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 2000-03-06 10:20 AM


Love is so unique isn't it

A snow flake
coming gently to the ground
unique in every way
no two the same

a love
unique in every way
falling gently on you
sparkling on your heart
not melting like the snowflake
staying on your heart for a lifetime
and more
building growing
into an awe inspiring feeling
of beauty, wonder and  magic

none two alike
warming the two lovers
drawing them near
making two become one

joing two hearts
into one
unique thing of beauty


netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
4 posted 2000-04-17 06:41 AM


eyesplus2, I love the snow, and I love
the way you liken the uniqueness of each
snowflake to individual kinds of love,
Thank you for sharing,

Teresa (netswan)

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