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eyesplus2
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0 posted 03-06-2000 12:56 AM       View Profile for eyesplus2   Email eyesplus2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for eyesplus2


......A snow flake coming gently to the
ground...unique in every way.........no two the same........a love
unique in every way.......falling gently on you......sparkling on your
heart......not melting like the snowflake...staying on your heart for a
lifetime and more......building....building......growing into an awe
inspiring feeling.......of beauty...wonder .....and  magic.........none
two alike.......warming the two lovers....drawing them
near........making two become one.........joing two hearts into one
unique thing of beauty.....


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Michael
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1 posted 03-06-2000 02:09 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

There is a unique beauty to every snowflake.  I found this lovely.


michael
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2 posted 03-06-2000 08:34 AM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

   Very beautiful, with a unique comparison between a snowflake and love.  Sounds like you are in love?

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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Love is so unique isn't it

A snow flake
coming gently to the ground
unique in every way
no two the same

a love
unique in every way
falling gently on you
sparkling on your heart
not melting like the snowflake
staying on your heart for a lifetime
and more
building growing
into an awe inspiring feeling
of beauty, wonder and  magic

none two alike
warming the two lovers
drawing them near
making two become one

joing two hearts
into one
unique thing of beauty

netswan
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4 posted 04-17-2000 06:41 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

eyesplus2, I love the snow, and I love
the way you liken the uniqueness of each
snowflake to individual kinds of love,
Thank you for sharing,

Teresa (netswan)
 
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