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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-03-06 12:52 PM



......Love is a seed planted in a garden of hopes and dreams.....watered with joy......warmed with laughter....tended with care....the weeds of mistrust pulled out.......the rocks of anger thrown out....till all that's left is the flowers of you and I forever.......



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Honeybee
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1 posted 2000-03-06 08:38 AM



Now, this is absolutely beautiful.   It is simple, but so very sweet. You have a such a way with words when describing love.
I loved this one!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-03-06 10:15 AM


Oh no, it's me again and with the same suggestion once more   Beautful thoughts in this piece  

Love is a seed
planted in a garden
of hopes and dreams
watered with joy
warmed with laughter
tended with care

the weeds of mistrust pulled out
the rocks of anger thrown out
till all that's left
are the flowers of you
and I forever


nona
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 139
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3 posted 2000-03-06 11:40 AM


Very well said. Keep up the good work

 

Denise
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4 posted 2000-03-06 09:38 PM


Beautiful thoughts in this and I agree with Hoot about the formating!

Denise

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5 posted 2000-03-06 10:18 PM


EyesPlus~
Your thoughts are lovely.
I'm voting with the other gals on format.
Simply wonderful images.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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