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A graden

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eyesplus2
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0 posted 03-06-2000 12:52 AM       View Profile for eyesplus2   Email eyesplus2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for eyesplus2


......Love is a seed planted in a garden of hopes and dreams.....watered with joy......warmed with laughter....tended with care....the weeds of mistrust pulled out.......the rocks of anger thrown out....till all that's left is the flowers of you and I forever.......


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1 posted 03-06-2000 08:38 AM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee


Now, this is absolutely beautiful.   It is simple, but so very sweet. You have a such a way with words when describing love.
I loved this one!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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2 posted 03-06-2000 10:15 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh no, it's me again and with the same suggestion once more   Beautful thoughts in this piece  

Love is a seed
planted in a garden
of hopes and dreams
watered with joy
warmed with laughter
tended with care

the weeds of mistrust pulled out
the rocks of anger thrown out
till all that's left
are the flowers of you
and I forever

nona
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3 posted 03-06-2000 11:40 AM       View Profile for nona   Email nona   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nona

Very well said. Keep up the good work

 
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4 posted 03-06-2000 09:38 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful thoughts in this and I agree with Hoot about the formating!

Denise
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5 posted 03-06-2000 10:18 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

EyesPlus~
Your thoughts are lovely.
I'm voting with the other gals on format.
Simply wonderful images.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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