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I Made A Wish And You Came True

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Marge Tindal
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I Made A Wish
And You Came True
~*Marge Tindal*~


I had only to say the words
to make you a reality.
And now that we
with love, are blessed,
of all my wishes come true,
I really like you best.

You are my up
when I would be down
my smile when I might otherwise frown.
You light up my life with a smile
having dwelt within my heart all the while.

I made a wish
and you came true.
I knew it from the start.
For all the times I've wished,
you lived within my heart.
I just may love you forever
if that's okay with you.
Until time as we know it passes
and knowing that it's okay,
I think I'm gonna love you
'til time slips away.





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 03-06-2000 01:07 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Somehow, with a few words you are always able to bring a smile to my lips Marge -
"You are my up
when I would be down"

isn't that what it's all about? I think a person to compliment you is what we all search for! Well done and may everyone be granted their wishes for a love like this!
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Marge
Whoever you wrote this for is a very special person indeed, this was just lovely my friend


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
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Christopher~
You have just put the 'good-night kiss'
on my day with your lovely comments.
If I can give just one smile ...
I've done all I set out to do today.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Tracie, hon~
You slipped in there as I was posting.
Thank you ... it's for every special
somebody in someone's life.
I've sure got some special somebody's
to which it applies.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 03-06-2000 01:59 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I stand envious of the feeling you portray in this poem.  A beautiful and heart-warming work.


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You know me Marge(y) and while I agree that this is lovely I stand back and wonder if such a thing is truly possible. This little heart mired in doubt can't yet believe in the truth of it.

Lovely writing my friend.

Kammies

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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This is romantic stuff Marge and I like it.  James
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Michael~
My heart thanks you.  

Kamla~

Oh, 'little heart mired in doubt'
the truths will someday find you out.
Pick you up and set you down
in someone's dream of love.
The truth you'll see
believingly ...
then there'll be no doubt.

(I notice you said 'yet')  

James~
Romantic ... yep.
I believe in it.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Well, Marge, I made a wish to read beautiful poetry this morning, and you made it come true with your poem.  I loved this one.  You speak of love so perfectly.  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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This one brought a smile to my face  

"I think I'm gonna love you
'til time slips away."

Now that's love!!!!



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Melissa~
You delight me with your responses.
Glad you had a wish come true.
Thank you ...

Hoot~
Now leave it to you to pick
out what is also my favorite thought
in this poem.
Doesn't surprise me !
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge,
Enjoyed the read of this very much. *L*
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Sounds like "wishcraft" to me.  I stand in line with the rest of the envious.  
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Seymour~  Thank you, love.

Serenity~
'Wishcraft' .. how adorable !
Thank you for the smile !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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well maiden....another stroke of the pen
another treasured story....the glen beckons
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Ahhhh !  My ~Warrior~
How treasured to see you among
this circle of friends.
I smile.  
Love ~*Maiden*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Ah, yes! Those special someones are what makes life worth living! Beautiful, Marge!

Denise
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Denise~
Yes ... special indeed.
Thanks again for being YOU !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge,
You captured the give and take of love as well as the completion of one's self when true love is found.  You have an amazing talent, I feel blessed to have the chance to read your work.  Thank you.
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ButterfliesDC~
Welcome to the Passion's family.
Thank you for your nice compliments.
I love sharing the feelings of love.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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