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I saw what I wanted for me

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Kevin
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0 posted 03-05-2000 11:44 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

Sooner or later we wake up,
sooner or later it ends.
It seems life at times, that we make up
images of those we call friends.

And sooner or later we wake up,
and see it was all in our minds.
So much time, confusion can take up,
so much pain as a friendship unwinds.

You were not the person I once knew,
Today I have come to see.
All the time that you were being you
I saw what I wanted for me.
© Copyright 2000 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-06-2000 12:06 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kevin~
Very astute.
Very sad if true in your life.

I think we always look for a little
of  ourselves in our friendships ...
and are sometimes disappointed
when they don't turn out the way
we hoped they'd be.

Hope all is well in your
corner of the world.
Good to see you.
~*Marge*~



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hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 03-06-2000 09:42 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Kevin...it's nice to see you back around, been missing your posts here  
Kevin
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3 posted 03-08-2000 02:52 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

Hi guys! thank you for replying im sorry i havent been able to get to anyone elses posts, or read any of my replys for that matter, life is hectic right now, and i can only drop in breifly every now and then...
but i still thought someone might enjoy the read and hey if ive got 5 minutes hehe...anyways good to hear from ya

kev
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4 posted 03-08-2000 05:18 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Wow Kevin...so much truth in just 3 stanzas...Bravo!

Unfortunately, I am awake too.  LOL  And unwound...geesh, what a ride.  I relate to, " I saw what I wanted for me".....Excellent writing sir.  Do we ever really know the other person?  I don't think so....tis sad.  We only see what we want to see, I have been very guilty of that.  I applaude your honesty and your thoughts on this.   Gennifer
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5 posted 03-08-2000 05:27 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Sir Kevin, another great write. Deep is the meaning here, and you always write these messages with ease. excellant.

Parker
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6 posted 03-08-2000 05:28 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Kevin~ "waking up" isn't always easy on the heart. Enjoyed the read. -SEA
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7 posted 03-08-2000 07:19 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Good poem! I think this is true sometimes, we want our friends to be the same type of person we are and when they aren't we justify it....  
Marina
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8 posted 03-08-2000 11:32 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Kevin, wonderful writing!  I think you have wisdom beyond your years sir!

Marina
 
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