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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana 
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Journey begins to mess up already Arising early to wake up Nothing in sight to kill Unstable is my horse Arm at hand I shoot at the sun Radiating for me the sound of bullets Yellowing the insight of my brain Foreign woman that I am E-mailing to strangers Bursting with joy to share a few words Rudimentary is the connection Uncertain of our whereabouts Attaining a thrill, filling the decay Raging, soaring toward the coffin Yearning maximum satisfaction guaranty Mossy New Orléans here I come Abducted by your charm Remembering the time Cruising the streets Homeless Announcing the flowers Parading my world Rhyming the colors Infiltrating nature Lenitive to my soul Material to be sewn Around my body Yielding nakedness undercover Joy to the world summer is here Utterly awesome Necessary warmness Erasing coldness of the heart Jolly be Uninhibited bikini Lapsing into my hand Yanking your nudity to hell and back Arise one more time Unfolding the end of days Gathered in the freedom of no school Using my hand to wipe the table clean Salty is your cooking Tantalizing life for more to come Smelling winter of my past Electricity turned on for light to shine Penetrating my lungs puffing my breast Torturing your eyes full of looks Emitting sounds of making love Managing un ménage à 5 Bite my head to understand my life Rolling about like a soccer ball Exciting the crowd in the pen O baby Halloween is just around the Corner getting ready To wear my mask Of little dreams coming true Between reality and lie Readjusting fantasy Ejaculating left and right Novelty is dying Of boredom Velour snow covering my domain Erected for my children to live in peace Mourning my death Boubbabbalou Rescuing the damage done Emigrée aux États-Unis Death has to come to End the stage of life Creeping my veins Energy transmitting la joie de vivre Massage my neck will you Baby what will I do now Ride on my white horse Eternity has arrived monique [This message has been edited by monique (edited 03-05-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Monique~ This is an exquisitely done acrostic. I like it so very much. Humor and thoughts appealing. It bears a second and third read. Thanks for sharing your calendar of events. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I can tell a great deal of thought went into this one  |
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monique Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 369Louisiana |
I wrote it without thinking I just opened the faucet And my life story went down the dr a i n monique |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Had to read this couple of times. Lots of imagery here. Like the structure and the French. |
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