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monique
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0 posted 03-05-2000 10:53 PM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for monique

Journey begins to mess up already
Arising early to wake up
Nothing in sight to kill
Unstable is my horse
Arm at hand I shoot at the sun
Radiating for me the sound of bullets
Yellowing the insight of my brain

Foreign woman that I am
E-mailing to strangers
Bursting with  joy to share a few words
Rudimentary is the connection
Uncertain of our whereabouts
Attaining a thrill, filling the decay
Raging, soaring toward the coffin
Yearning maximum satisfaction guaranty

Mossy New Orléans here I come
Abducted by your charm
Remembering the time
Cruising the streets
Homeless

Announcing the flowers
Parading my world
Rhyming the colors
Infiltrating nature
Lenitive to my soul

Material to be sewn
Around my body
Yielding nakedness undercover

Joy to the world summer is here
Utterly awesome
Necessary warmness
Erasing coldness of the heart

Jolly be
Uninhibited bikini
Lapsing into my hand
Yanking your nudity to hell and back

Arise one more time
Unfolding the end of days
Gathered in the freedom of no school
Using my hand to wipe the table clean
Salty is your cooking
Tantalizing life for more to come

Smelling winter of my past
Electricity turned on for light to shine
Penetrating my lungs puffing my breast
Torturing your eyes full of looks
Emitting sounds of making love
Managing un ménage à 5
Bite my head to understand my life
Rolling about like a soccer ball
Exciting the crowd in the pen

O baby Halloween is just around the
Corner getting ready
To wear my mask
Of little dreams coming true
Between reality and lie
Readjusting fantasy
Ejaculating left and right

Novelty is dying
Of boredom
Velour snow covering my domain
Erected for my  children to live in peace
Mourning my death
Boubbabbalou
Rescuing the damage done
Emigrée aux États-Unis

Death has to come to
End the stage of life
Creeping my veins
Energy transmitting la joie de vivre
Massage my neck will you
Baby what will I do now
Ride on my white horse
Eternity has arrived

monique




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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 03-05-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Monique~
This is an exquisitely done acrostic.
I like it so very much.
Humor and thoughts appealing.
It bears a second and third read.
Thanks for sharing your calendar of events.
~*Marge*~


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hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 03-06-2000 09:53 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I can tell a great deal of thought went into this one  
monique
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Louisiana


3 posted 03-06-2000 10:49 AM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for monique

I wrote it without thinking
I just opened the faucet
And my life story went
down
the
dr
a
i
n

monique
Danny Holloway
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4 posted 03-06-2000 10:58 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Had to read this couple of times.  Lots of imagery here.  Like the structure and the French.
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