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~ Oh to feel the Passion ~

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poetFemmeFatale
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~  Oh to feel the Passion  ~

Oh to feel the passion
in the wind of sultry breeze
basking in a brand new sun
To my chest I draw my knees
lay my head on them to rest
as I close my eyes & sigh
breathing deep the air of you & me
and smiling to the sky...

Oh to feel the passion
in the wind of sultry breeze
To be tossed upon the waves
to be sailing on the seas...
Lay my head upon the sand
as I close my eyes & sigh
breathing deep the air of yesterday
my dreams go flitting by...

Oh to feel the passion
in the sultry breeze of you
I have yet to kiss your smile
I have yet to know it's true...
Lay my head upon your whisper
as I close my eyes to dream
breathing deep - the scent of love
All my faith, you do redeem.

March 5, 2000

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 03-05-2000 07:09 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Oh, to read the passion you write.... this too is excellent, Femme....very good writing.
Loneheart
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2 posted 03-05-2000 07:29 PM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

truly beautiful

 Loneheart
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3 posted 03-05-2000 08:11 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

PoetFemme~
Very, very sultry.
I like the feel of it.
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 03-05-2000 10:35 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

I know just the place. . .

Love this one Femme. . .

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Tony Di Bart
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5 posted 03-05-2000 11:31 PM       View Profile for Tony Di Bart   Email Tony Di Bart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tony Di Bart

Great read.

Your passion rang loud and clear and I could hear the sound of that ocean. But most
of all I like that you lay your head upon his whisper.  Wow that one line made the whole poem form me.  For me everythinfg else in the poem was there to take me to that line.


Thanks for posting.

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and gives us wings
where we had shoulders
smooth as raven claws

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6 posted 03-06-2000 01:27 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Sigh...when you go girl, you go girl! Bravissimo Gen, another hit!
poetFemmeFatale
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7 posted 03-06-2000 11:13 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Thanks to everyone, and nice to meet you Tony!  Thank you for the really nice reply!  And to er.....
Christopher - - I sense some of that sarcasm from you sir, that I truly miss!     You're the only guy I've ever known who can say something that makes me want to get in a *ring* with, and do a few of my kickboxing moves on!!  ROFLMAO  No mercy.....
Danny Holloway
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Oh, that sultry breeze.  Let those soft winds blow.
Very nice pFF, I also liked "lay my head upon your whisper".
Soooooooo nice!
PoeticKnight
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9 posted 03-06-2000 12:08 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

i can't quite put my finger on it, but this one really speaks to me. I feel the words and the atmosphere, very sensual and calming at the same time. Wonderful lines...every single one.
Craig
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10 posted 03-06-2000 06:58 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig


I like this one too!!

In fact if I was to choose between this and the last one, this one would win (just). I think it's the knee and chest bit that swung it.  

Craig

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But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.

January Flowers
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11 posted 03-06-2000 08:47 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Okay, pFF...
I'm of the female gender, so
unlike the replies of Mr. Danny
and the other masculine poets,
my view on this writing are from a way
different perspective...
THANK GOODNESS, RIGHT?
This was a great poem, enjoyed the repitition of the 'sultry breeze' thing,
and the line that 'got me' was the one where you pull your knees into your chest and lay your head to rest...
I SOOOOOO relate to this poem,
and often find myself absorbing all of nature's passions...allowing for a clearer conscience and more tangible thoughts on that special person...

Wow!  You do have a way of writing
exactly what so many of us have felt.
Thanks!
devina
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12 posted 03-06-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I think you had me with just the title Gen...

Lay my head upon your whisper...this is purely beautiful!!!! But I'm sure you know that!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Toyy
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13 posted 03-07-2000 07:13 PM       View Profile for Toyy   Email Toyy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toyy

         ~  Oh to feel the Passion  ~

And I do! This is very beautiful, you have written from my heart!! I am new here and read quite a few poems, all of which I have liked, but this is my favorite, your writing is lovely...thank you!!

gil
 
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