I'm of the female gender, so
unlike the replies of Mr. Danny
and the other masculine poets,
my view on this writing are from a way
THANK GOODNESS, RIGHT?
This was a great poem, enjoyed the repitition of the 'sultry breeze' thing,
and the line that 'got me' was the one where you pull your knees into your chest and lay your head to rest...
I SOOOOOO relate to this poem,
and often find myself absorbing all of nature's passions...allowing for a clearer conscience and more tangible thoughts on that special person...
Wow! You do have a way of writing
exactly what so many of us have felt.