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Fearful Burn

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poetFemmeFatale
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~  Fearful Burn ~


Words so sincere
lightly dusted with fear
Sprang forth like a well
from the torrents of dual Hell...

Two screams became one
words of love, now undone
What was truth, now called lies
Yet it comes as no surprise.

"Imbalance" was the cause
slaughtered in a moment's pause
There were problems deep inside
Neither Hell could dare try hide...

Time thought these two should be
yet the truth was yet to see
The souls weren't parallel
with eruption, they both fell.

Now the love displayed as lies
in their Hell, they close their eyes
Conquer first the doubts & fears
so that no one burns in tears...


© Copyright 2000 Gennifer David - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-05-2000 07:08 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I like this very much! Excellent work!  
Local Rebel
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2 posted 03-06-2000 09:33 AM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Salient Gen... very pointed....

good to see you!
Danny Holloway
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3 posted 03-06-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Another piece true to your creative style.
"words of love, now undone".  Expressed so well, so sad.
Nice work.
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poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 03-06-2000 11:05 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

yeah...I knew this one would flop, I almost didn't post it because I know no one likes this dark side of me any more than I do.  Thanks anyway PdV - you always have something nice to say to EVERYONE!....LOL.....And by golly, there's old Local Rebel!  Where the heck you been hiding sir?  I am honored you stopped by to spread a little kindness to this dreary post of mine!  LOL    

Ah...and Danny - you snuck in here and posted while I wasn't looking!  Don't want to forget you!  
Glad you got it, wasn't sure, 'twas a bit lengthy!  

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Never hiding Gen -- I'm always at www.geocities.com/nighthawke700/  

lest we contrast the light and the dark -- the light has no meaning.. eh?



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6 posted 03-06-2000 01:18 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Does only a flame burn?  We know it to indeed be false. . .

Excellent work Femme. . . you always know how to express it. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Craig
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7 posted 03-06-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig


Enjoyed the read, a sad subject but a great poem.

Craig


 Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool:
But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet.

 
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