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Fearful Burn
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Fearful Burn |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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~ Fearful Burn ~ Words so sincere lightly dusted with fear Sprang forth like a well from the torrents of dual Hell... Two screams became one words of love, now undone What was truth, now called lies Yet it comes as no surprise. "Imbalance" was the cause slaughtered in a moment's pause There were problems deep inside Neither Hell could dare try hide... Time thought these two should be yet the truth was yet to see The souls weren't parallel with eruption, they both fell. Now the love displayed as lies in their Hell, they close their eyes Conquer first the doubts & fears so that no one burns in tears... |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this very much! Excellent work!  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Salient Gen... very pointed.... good to see you! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Another piece true to your creative style. "words of love, now undone". Expressed so well, so sad. Nice work. (message received) [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-06-2000).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
yeah...I knew this one would flop, I almost didn't post it because I know no one likes this dark side of me any more than I do. Thanks anyway PdV - you always have something nice to say to EVERYONE!....LOL.....And by golly, there's old Local Rebel! Where the heck you been hiding sir? I am honored you stopped by to spread a little kindness to this dreary post of mine! LOL  Ah...and Danny - you snuck in here and posted while I wasn't looking! Don't want to forget you!  Glad you got it, wasn't sure, 'twas a bit lengthy! [This message has been edited by poetFemmeFatale (edited 03-06-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Never hiding Gen -- I'm always at www.geocities.com/nighthawke700/ lest we contrast the light and the dark -- the light has no meaning.. eh? [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 03-06-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Does only a flame burn? We know it to indeed be false. . . Excellent work Femme. . . you always know how to express it. . . ---------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Enjoyed the read, a sad subject but a great poem. Craig Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool: But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet. |
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