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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2000-03-05 03:58 PM


SOULS EMBRACE

My Love, it is with passion that my heart sings,
Words you whisper are soft spoken melodies to thy ear,

Today, tomorrow, a thousand hours torn between us,
Yet thy heart still beats strong upon every word I have written,

Your smile is a garden of roses, so red, tender
and full,

Your voice echoes in my dreams a million times per hour, per minute, per second,

How lovely is thou, more handsome than feathers of doves,

Gentle is thy hands, seaching me like eyes through the mist,

My mind is enslaved by your every command,
I am your servant, a begger of sorts,

For neither night nor dark shall keep thee away from you,

Heaviness envelopes me, my love, longing to hear thy words,

Grieveing, torture, is there no end to this maddness?

Days and hours on end, My soul is departed without you,

My love, I must hold to thy memories, I must close thy eyes, inhale you with all my breath,

My breath, my love, my life,
You are the stars in my heaven,

When my eyes look upon them every night,
throughout the darkness,

I am whole complete,
For I know where thou are,

With eye of diamonds,
You look upon the same stars,under the same sky,

Our souls collide, our hearts meet,
Neither darkness, nor night, nor armies,
or anything could separate our souls,

Once again, I am weeping, connected in spirit,
For your love has made me whole,
I am complete,

For even though we cannot touch,
Our hearts bear witness underneath the heavens,

For I will forever be thy queen, you thy king,
not even death shall rob me,

For I am loved forever, by thy souls embrace.





 "Unto every life, A little love must fall!"


© Copyright 2000 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-05 08:27 PM


Sounds like love to me! Very romantic, RH! It's nice to see you posting again! I missed you!

Denise

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2000-03-06 08:11 AM


Hi Dee, and thanks, I have been away, first my mom has had cancer, and my computer crashed, both are doing fineand my mom is cancer free as of now! PTL!!! I missed all of you guys!!!!! and reading your poetry to inspire me!
Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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3 posted 2000-03-06 08:21 AM




Wow, this is exquisite.  This is such a beautiful and bittersweet poem. With every word that you have written, there is such a passionate feeling that the reader feels reading this piece. Welcome back!!  I definately look forward to more poetry by you.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2000-03-06 08:33 AM


Thank you Melissa, you are too kind, I am glad you could feel that passion from my words, I look forward to reading your poetry as well! take care!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare



hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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5 posted 2000-03-06 10:23 AM


RH...welcome back, a truly romantic piece  
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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2000-03-06 02:15 PM


Thanks Hoot for the welcome!!!! I love the Hoot owl thingy, it is soo cute!!!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare



Denise
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7 posted 2000-03-06 07:45 PM


I'm so glad your Mom is doing better!! Praise the Lord is right! Glad your computer is back up and running too!  

Denise

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2000-03-06 10:13 PM


Dee, I would like to e-mail you sometime, would that be ok?

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare



Denise
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9 posted 2000-03-06 10:16 PM


Certainly! That would be wonderful!  

Denise

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
10 posted 2000-03-08 02:46 AM


e-mail me first so I know I have your correct e-mail!   Thanks!!!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare



First__Knight
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 678

11 posted 2000-03-08 03:15 AM


Oh I almost missed this work of yours here.  Your name fits you well and this piece of poetry proves it    

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.


Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

12 posted 2000-03-09 03:55 PM


Oh such beautiful words, such beautiful lines.. So passionate...This melted my heart, made my head spin. wow, loved it! very romantic. Well Done. Looking forward to reading more.   wish I could write like that.

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
13 posted 2000-03-09 11:02 PM


Dark angel I am glad you enjoyed the poem, thanks for your expressive and sweet comments!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


Parker
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14 posted 2000-03-10 12:17 PM


A Romantic Heart, you poetry is quite amazing. I thought I was lost in romantic mush heaven, you are romantic mush heaven.

Parker

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
15 posted 2000-03-10 01:12 AM


And you my lord, (bowing in a curtsey, with hand out to thee,)are the king among heavens poets, whose words capture thy heart...whose poetry enchants me into a kingdom of romance and fantasy! !!!!!!!!!!!!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


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