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Blue Turning Pink

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monique
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Louisiana


0 posted 03-05-2000 09:06 AM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for monique




My baby don't love me no more
And I'm so glad
Because his love was so jealous
That it wasn't funny

His hatred feels like deliverance
Because he ain't killing me no more
With "Who have you been with?"
Like if I'm sleeping with everybody

Now I am free to be
Without his lies about loving me
Thinking that I am rich
So he can use all my money

Now that he realizes
That I am poor as he is
He don't love me no more
O baby O
I don't have any dollars
To give you joy and happiness

Now he has found someone else
Who loves him as much as I do
But she doesn't know yet that
A con artist is on the drawing board

Should I tell her?
Nah! she would not believe me anyway
We are from the tribe 'Learn the hard way'
Gullible women at work

monique





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Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 03-05-2000 09:44 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

hello monique ... nice to see you posting
it's too bad that a gigolo shows up when a relationship needs so much more than sex

as to where I am going ... I'm getting too busy with pond club business now that the season and meetings have started again ... we have also many shows to prepare for ... the first of which is next Saturday for the 'Master Gardeners' although I have no time to write much ... I will be back as often as I can to read and toss in a few comments

Rex}<{{{{o>


 I'm not ugly!
I'm just visually challenged!


monique
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Louisiana


2 posted 03-05-2000 01:06 PM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for monique

I probably should have use the word con artist instead of gigolo

I am glad for you to take a break
Cause when you get back
You'll have all kind of good poems
To share with us

monique
JamesMichael
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3 posted 03-05-2000 02:46 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"My baby don't love me no more and I'm glad"
I really like the way you wrote this.  Cause it could have been my baby don't love me no more and I'm sad.   But you are happy to see the truth and you are embracing it.      James
monique
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4 posted 03-05-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for monique   Email monique   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for monique

Journey begins to mess up already
Arising early to wake up
Nothing in sight to kill
Unstable is my horse
Arm at hand I shoot at the sun
Radiating for me the sound of bullets
Yellowing the insight of my brain

Foreign woman that I am
E-mailing to strangers
Bursting with  joy to share a few words
Rudimentary is the connection
Uncertain of our whereabouts
Attaining a thrill, filling the decay
Raging, soaring toward the coffin
Yearning maximum satisfaction guaranty

Mossy New Orléans here I come
Abducted by your charm
Rembering the time
Cruising the streets
Homeless

Announcing the flowers
Parading my world
Rhyming the colors
Infiltrating nature
Lenitive to my soul

Material to be sewn
Around my body
Yielding nakedness undercover

Joy to the world summer is here
Utterly awesome
Necessary warmness
Erasing coldness of the heart

Jolly be
Uninhibited bikini
Lapsing into my hand
Yanking your nudity to hell and back

Arise one more time
Unfolding the end of days
Gathered in the freedom of no school
Using my hand to wipe the table clean
Salty is your cooking
Tantalizing life for more to come

Smelling winter of my past
Electricity turned on for light to shine
Penetrating my lungs puffing my breast
Torturing your eyes full of looks
Emitting sounds of making love
Managing un ménage à 5
Bite my head to understand my life
Rolling about like a soccer ball
Exciting the crowd in the pen

O baby Halloween is just around the
Corner getting ready
To wear my mask
Of little dreams coming true
Between reality and lie
Readjusting fantasy
Ejaculating left and right

Novelty is dying
Of boredom
Velour snow covering my domain
Erected for my  children to live in peace
Mourning my death
Boubbabbalou
Rescuing the damage done
Emigrée aux États-Unis

Death has to come to
End the stage of life
Creeping my veins
Energy transmitting la joie de vivre
Massage my neck will you
Baby what will I do now
Ride on my white horse
Eternity has arrived

monique

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