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Open Poetry #6

To the hearts icy core...

Tan
New Member

since 2000-03-05

Posts 7

0 posted 2000-03-05 06:59 AM

Embedded with ice as cold as my frozen tears
What was once as cruel as a winter storm, Summer stirs
From motionless streams, will life emerge?
Will Summer share warmth, though rightfully hers?

The green but a memory distant and faint
'Til beaming the sun bears his burning gold face
And melting the snow and the hearts and the lakes
Summer destroys and renews and creates

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2000-03-05 07:07 AM

Beautiful imagery, Tan. Welcome to Passions. I hope to see more ffrom you soon.

michael

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 2000-03-05 08:37 AM

Nice imagery, welcome to passions

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2000-03-05 09:21 AM

Welcome to the family! Beautiful poem. I too look forward to more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-03-05 09:46 AM

Tan~

I'd like to say

Hope to see more of your writing here.
After the winter thaw ...
Spring brings renewal ...
I love the summer days and rays !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2000-03-05 09:51 AM

Beautiful poem to start out with. Look forward to more
Liz

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

6 posted 2000-03-05 10:00 AM

Lovely!

And welcome!

Corinne

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2000-03-05 10:14 AM

Tan~this is beautiful, I like the short ones that hit the nail on the head. Welcome!

~shadows dance by the light within~

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 2000-03-05 11:53 AM

Welcome to Passions, Tan! I enjoyed your first poem and look forward to reading more from you!

Denise

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