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Divinity for deVine

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Alicat
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0 posted 03-05-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alicat

One day into the hearth I went, by the oven's glow,
The scent of winter baking sifting softly through the air.
The Confectioneryist was there putting on a show,
With dough stuck to his fingers and some flour in his hair.

The candy called 'Divinity' was his pride and joy,
With many years perfecting what he called his 'Art';
And sometimes would secrete in each a little tiny toy,
A ploy of his to often melt the hardest hard of heart.

The dinger 'ding'ed and out they came, perfect in every way,
Like pearly incandescent clouds upon a summer's day;
And when he bent to get the rest, I pilfered some away
And after tasting of his 'Art', here's what I have to say:

It melts upon the tongue as soft as a feathered bed,
Then sits upon the stomach, like a quarter tonne of lead.


Alicat the Persnikitty


 As I sit here dimly thinking
Watching modem lights a-blinking
Churning out poetic hash.
Lord, in all Your piety,
Help me keep my sanity:
Please don't let the modem crash! --Alicat

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1 posted 03-05-2000 12:52 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

LOL....very funny! I didn't expect that! Good poem sir!!!! LOL    
hoot_owl_rn
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Smiles...give me the chocolate or peanutbutter fudge over that stuff anyday  
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I love surprise endings! Very good!!

Denise
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This is so sweet!!!!!!!!
 
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