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A Tear Fell

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Marge Tindal
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A Tear Fell
~*Marge Tindal*~



I shed a tear today
Silently, I felt it fall
You caught it
shared it
held it
felt it
then
suddenly
it wasn't
so big
after all





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com           



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-05-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Corinne
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Wow!  This is lovely, Marge!

Corinne
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Wonderful as always Marge.

Chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.
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Nice one Marge(y)

*Twinkle*

K

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life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
Marge Tindal
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Corinne~
What a delight you are.
Thank you for liking this little piece.


ChrisG~
I'm glad you found it wonderful.

Kamla~
And YOU, young lady ...  
Love seeing you here.
~*Marge(y)



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And you, my dear, have caught a few of mine
This is wonderful!
Liz
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How sweet, you seem to catch many of our tears  
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I like this Marge...good image...
Marge Tindal
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Elizabeth, my friend~
If I could but place my arms around
you and just squeeze you with a hug ...
    
I hope I hug you with what I write ..

Hoot~
If I can catch the tear of a friend ...
I've only paid back those who have
caught and held mine.
This is just the way I feel about
sharing and caring.
I did and I do.  

PoetdeVine~
Thank you for your welcomed comments.
~*Marge*~



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noles1@totcon.com

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Marge, this is a short and perfect poem.  I loved it.  Did you write this specifically for a friend of yours?  If so, you certainly have a great friend.  Whenever I shed tears beside one of my friends, I will always think of your poem.  Beautiful!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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This says it all, Marge! Beautiful poem, beautiful presentation!

Denise
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Melissa~
Thank you for always liking what I write.
My heart dictates the thoughts.
Sometimes they are for me ...
sometimes just there to be said
for someone else.

I've had friends who have caught my tears
and shared my sorrow.  The greatest gift
I can return is to hold the tears of
someone else.

I'm glad you will remember these simple
lines the next time a friend needs you
or you need a friend.
No poet could ask for more.
Thank you again.

Denise~
Thank you, my friend.
I'm so pleased that it has pleased you.
~*Marge*~


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Marge, And within this tear I see a gem. *L*
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Oh gosh, I wish I could have said what Sy said...so perfect..this is lovely.
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Seymour~
What a wonderful thing to have you say.
Thank you, my friend.

Martie~
Well, thank you for letting me know
that you think it !
(wouldn't we all like to say some
of the wonderful things he says?)
It counts the same !  
I'm glad you like it, Martie~.
~*Marge*~


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Marge,
i read this at the latest issue of DP and was so blown and awed by it.....

i love it i love it i love it i love it....

i only wish that i have been inspired to write this one.
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Kaile~
I do so appreciate you taking a moment to
let me know that you were moved by this little piece.

I feel that tears are meant to be shared -
and in doing so - we dilute the sorrow.
Tears of joy are often the result of someone caring enough
to hold our tears in times of sorrow.

*Hugs* to you for your thoughtfulness.
~*Marge*~


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I know what you mean..lovely..James
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James~
Thank you.
Sharing is so necessary.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
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