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A Girls Dream

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Mystykyl
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0 posted 03-04-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for Mystykyl   Email Mystykyl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystykyl

A Girl's Dream

One day I plan to get married
To a man that is sweet and caring
I will have his child, maybe a few
He will be the man of my dreams to
His kiss will be gentle and soft
And our love will be caught
Just like the shooting stars from up above
And, never will end, our fantastic love
The day will come someday
And in some special way
Right now it is just a dream of a girl
In this messed up and crazed out world
My dream is to be walked down the aisle by my dad
And not my brother who is still just a lad
My life will be wonderfully good
Like some fairy-tale that came out of a little kid's book
All of my family will be there
Or atleast the ones that give a damn and care
My mom will cry, but only happily
And, like at the mushy movies, very sappily
The music will play good and loud
No matter the size of the crowd
Then on to our honey moon we will go
Just like any one dreams of, we'll go to Kokomo
Maybe to Cuba or Niagra Falls
But we'll have fun behind those locked doors and walls
I'll wake up a married girl
And next to me will be the man that rocks my world
Then we'll live a life full of laughter
And very happily ever after
Misty Lane 2/24/99


 
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JamesMichael
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1 posted 03-05-2000 06:53 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very nice dreams...a life full of laughter and happily ever after.  James
Danny Holloway
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2 posted 03-06-2000 11:37 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

I enjoyed reading your poem.  I just walked my daughter down that marriage aisle, and can't tell you how proud I was of her and excited about the wonderful guy she married.
Dream's do come true, both hers and mine did that day, a week ago.  Their honeymooning in Las Vegas.
Your day will come
sonjes
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3 posted 03-06-2000 02:08 PM       View Profile for sonjes   Email sonjes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sonjes

I liked your poem, but being the pessimist I am...I too, once had that dream.  Then, I actually got married, and it has become my nightmare.
Just kidding  
Keep dreaming and someday, it may come true, until then, write, write, write.

  Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma
Mystykyl
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4 posted 03-06-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for Mystykyl   Email Mystykyl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystykyl

My day did come. I ended up getting married in front of the justice of the peace and i got into a fight the night of my wedding with my husband and a few big ones since. I have been married almost 5 months and i still dont have it done the way i wanted it. i never did get my honey moon either. Its ok tho, someday i will get my big wedding and dream honey moon. Thank you all for reading this and responding. And good luck to you all. and Congrats to u and the newly wed.
January Flowers
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5 posted 03-06-2000 08:52 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

DREAMS
are
G R E A T

If it weren't for dreams, there'd be no such thing as "story book" endings.

This writing was...nice.  If only it really happened that way for the majority who decide to marry.
Toyy
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6 posted 03-07-2000 07:20 PM       View Profile for Toyy   Email Toyy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toyy

Mystykyl, I hope this is the dream that comes true for my daughter even though I wont have to worry about it for awhile since she is but 12. And you know what? I will walk my bestest little friend down the aisle, cant wait!! Your poem brought a smile to my face   Thanks!

gil
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