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Lucie
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0 posted 2000-03-04 09:50 PM


It's been a while since I have seen these hallowed halls of rhyme.
I had so many things to say, I thought perhaps it's time.

To sit and write a shortened verse about my new found pain.
But when I wrote the words down they made me sound insane.

Not that it'd be a big surprise to know I've lost my mind.
It's not losing it that worries me, it's how hard it is to find.

I searched the local lost and found, maybe someone turned it in.
I told them what it looked like, but I couldn't tell them when.

So if you happen to find a piece of mind that looks just like a pea.
Could you take the time to pick it up, cause it belongs to me.


© Copyright 2000 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-03-04 10:31 PM


Lucie~
So glad to see you
within these hallowed halls.
You'll be glad to know
we've been bouncing off the walls.

Seems that we've ALL lost
a mind that looks like a pea.
So if I should find one ...
I'd have to keep it for me !

But if you need a hug,
now I've got lots in store.
Use one up and come on back ...
I've got even more.  

~*HUGS*~
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-03-05 12:08 PM


Lucie! Nice to see you here..I know where your mind is hiding..right there behind your heart of gold!!!  

Severn
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3 posted 2000-03-05 01:58 AM


Nice to see a poem from you here...and I'm keeping my eye for you.

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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4 posted 2000-03-05 08:16 AM


Hey Lucie, I'll look, but still haven't found mine either so I won't promise a thing here  
suthern
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5 posted 2000-03-05 09:26 AM


Nah... if I find it, I'm keeping it to replace the one I lost! *G* Great poem, Lucie... and so good to see you back!
Denise
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6 posted 2000-03-05 11:44 AM


Welcome back, Lucie! Great to see a post from you again! MORE, MORE!!

Denise

Parker
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7 posted 2000-03-05 12:10 PM


Lucie, I love the humour in this, I don't know your stuff but looking forward to more.

Parker

poetFemmeFatale
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8 posted 2000-03-05 04:43 PM


Sounds to me like we've ALL been looking for our peas...I mean....minds!  I've noticed it's kind of hard to stand up in here, with all the peas and marbles rolling around on the forum floors!  ACK  So glad to see you here again Lucie...I've felt very alone of late!  LOL  No one to be a smart *ss with!  Hope you'll be around more.  I'm staying close to Adult, and that's about it.     Better that way!  Miss you as usual!  Find me or email me, ok?  I've done away with my ICQ also, so don't go there.
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