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A magic flare

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Seymour Tabin
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         A magic flare

It's from the images of glances,
That imagination dances.
And revelry and delivery,
Sends ingenuity lances.

They bake in the pan of gullible,
To form degrees of palpable.
And shimmer in a golden pond,
To quench the thirst of affable.

They make and fill the dreams of some.
They bridge across a field of fun.
They are pillars of a temple.
And they are the weave of anyone.

For I myself have built one such,
Upon an impish little touch.
And rose a castle in the air,
That washed away in overmuch

So if you think a magic flare,
Be very careful and aware.

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1 posted 03-04-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~
'It's from the images of glances,
That imagination dances.'

This is such a simple truth.
Amazing that you see it too.

May a 'magic flare' light up
your life with happiness, my friend.
~*Marge*~





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Beautiful, Seymour! I guess even though we have our dreams and fantasies reality always seems to have a way of bringing us back down to earth. Not a bad thing, though, I guess, otherwise how much fun could the fantasies be!

Denise
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You make the images dance on the page for all of us
Liz
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4 posted 03-05-2000 10:37 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge, your wisdom goes beyond your years *L*

Denise, I loved your comment. *L*

Elizabeth, You make my heart dance with your comments. Love Sy
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Ah Sy...wonderful again.

This line really gets me:

And they are the weave of anyone.

I love that.

K



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life enriches writing'
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Severn,
And they are the weave of anyone. thank you *L*
 
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