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Without You!

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 03-04-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Without You!


Without you
I'm left to walk alone
To think alone
Everything around me
Seems so huge
So distant
So quiet

I miss you
More than you know
You may not see it
And it may not show
But need you
I really do

You fill my days
With warmth
Like the sunlight rays
And with sweet music
Softly in my heart
It plays

Being without you
Reminds me of our love
How it was sent to me
From the Angels above
And of how much
And how deep
My heart you touch


Dark Angel
2000



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 03-04-2000 09:30 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

The love and longing are clearly evident in this one....nice expression of feelings  
WhtDove
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Hey there DA. Well, you know what this did to me already! This is beautiful girl! Very, very touching!
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3 posted 03-04-2000 09:44 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
This is sheer beauty of your heart.

'And of how much
And how deep
My heart you touch'

Couldn't have said it better !
~*Marge*~


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How sad and lovely! To love is wonderful and painful at that the same time...good poem DA.
Severn
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Oh my friend - this is truly beautiful. Straight from your heart I know. Hugs

K

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life enriches writing'
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Dark Angel
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Ruth, thank you!!  
***************
Angel, yes I know, Thank you honey.  
***************
Marge, thank you so much for your lovely and sweet reply.  
***************
Sharon Dear, thanks so very much!  
***************
Kamla, Thankyou Sweet Butterfly.
                                
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 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Denise
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7 posted 03-05-2000 08:29 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I agree! This is beautiful!

Denise
netswan
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Dark Angel this is sweet. I really like
it. --- ah, love and longing - such
a blessing such tender pain.

Teresa King
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DA...your loveliness shows with this one...beautiful  
Pepper
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Yes, so beautiful, DA .....
I've copied this into my Favorites ...

 "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind."
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Wonderful poem, Dark Angel!

Denise
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Oh my GOD!

This exactly the way I feel it!!!! I love this poem...!!!! Keep up the good work!
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