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the time of year for tears
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the time of year for tears |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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march 6 the day you grew wings and I earthbound cried out to you with love and despair like never felt before shall forever mark the calendar with my missing I wish you could come back and take the rest of me with you the bubbles in the sink she did her kitchen magic and I call it magic because she couldn't even recall you what she threw together to make them exclaim and ask for more, it was the day before the day that you left two years past and in her mind she was with you, this earthly vestige could not hold her spirit from joining yours in the clouds remembering smiles and soft kisses and touches so delicate so real… so far from the dishes that now need washed and the tears that softly join the bubbles in the sink. I miss him too in between the windex spray and the paper towel swirls and just before she fell to tears she said I am sorry I just can't hold it together any more and with sincerity the mirror looked back and said its ok girl, you go ahead and cry I understand I miss him too the three of us I sit and have to wonder just who is it I miss, and for whom do I cry is it him or you or maybe me I seem to have lost me somewhere in the process of losing him and finding you you held me up when his heart stopped but now its time for you to go too and I still can't find me the optometrist philosophy if I wore colored contacts and my eyes were no longer brown would you then, my friend have what it is I need? would I with green, color you with life desire and happiness, could I with blue paint your heart as mine and color me what you need? would a year and then just one more day be enough for your eyes to see the man that mine see for if you are not what I need, can you please tell my brown eyes to stop caring, to stop crying… I am confused [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 03-06-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent poem, Corazon. Well written. Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Awesome writing! This has such a rich flavor mixed in with pure sincerity. Beautifully done. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
The combination of excellent poetry and daily tasks, amazingly well done The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corazon~ I share the marked calendar this time of year. 'the day you grew wings and I earthbound cried out to you with love and despair like never felt before shall forever mark the calendar with my missing' Just beginning to even try to heal from the wounds of losing a sister. Your words reached out to me .... *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Your words speak greatly of your loss and pain. ((((HUGS)))) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
These are lovely and heartbreaking, dear friend. That girl in the mirror isn't the only one who understands how much you can miss not just him, but also the you that you were with him. Anniversaries will always bring memories... I pray for the day when your memories bring smiles. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corazon, This is amazing writing, so real, so emotional. I was right there with those emotions and the saddness. This is one of my favorites, thank you for sharing this. Parker  |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks all, this year has been easier than last, and I would thank you all here, the posting of my heart has helped me get through...thank you  |
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