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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 Singing of feather Trilling in warmth of the spring Look! Out on the lawn! ~*Marge*~ |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Now it is time to all haiku. Ah, spring, robins, hummingbirds, wonderful thoughts! Thank-you, Marge. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marge, very lovely and so visual and funny. Parker |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I love this--it is enchanting! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is adorable, Marge!!  Precious![This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 03-04-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A charming haiku, enjoyed. *L* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Love it, Marge! hehe. The first time I read it I didn't notice the exclamation mark after Look!....gave the poem a whole new meaning!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sonjes~ Springing forth with thoughts Hummingbird on wing flutters. Heartbeat away - Spring. Parker~ Funny are the thoughts Spring will bring to many men Heart touched by woman. Martie~ Enchanting love thoughts Blossom within the springing Seeds of love winging. Denise~ Spring adorable Thoughts are brought to precious bloom Spring is upon us. Seymour~ Charms of Spring, spring forth Renewing ancient legends Nature awakens. Balladeer~ Spring of the heart's beat Awakening thoughts of love Welcome, heart of Spring. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I see I'm not the only one with spring fever, this is lovely Marge I could here that birdie tweeting away. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ Spring birds sing sweetly Songs of Spring about them fly Springing lullabies. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
A little birdie told me that the sun would shine I thought I new that little birdie stitting in the vine Here i see the birdie again today Telling me that you have send it out my way Your poem is little like the bird above For such nice poem I thank you so much my Dove The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helmut~ Turtle Dove of Spring Winging thoughts straight to your heart Springing forth with love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
wow,i'm impressed--i especially like your 1st one cos i can just imagine this bird chirping away in my lawn,singing its song,as happy as it can be.... Having just introduced to Haiku,nevertheless,i can't seem to write anything worthwhile.here's the only thing i can come up with so far Composing My pen on my lips My face scowling in a frown Will I ever write? i guess i'm rude to post this under your topic but i do want to share this with another Haiku fan.Haiku seems so simple yet your skill must be terrific to be able to indulge in it.Agreed?')  do comment ") |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Spring does spring in thought Eternally feathering Perfect partners verse. ~*Marge*~ *Hi there. What you see in my post my first attempt at Haiku. I think it's done correctly, and if not then someone more versed will surely let me know. I do know that Haiku is originally a Japanese poetry style done in a syllabic standard of 5-7-5 ... is supposed to be about nature or things of wonder. Keep studying the technique if it appeals to you. I would suggest reading up on it a bit. I was just inspired by a few that I saw here and plunged in (after reading a few guidelines). Good luck. I'll play with it from time to time ... but my forte is rhyme. Will look for yours in the future. E-mail me if you want some help ... but, believe me ... I'm a novice ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
~Marge~ Lilly of the Pond Splashing in vibrant color Painter of the dream. *Parker* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Parker* Lotus of lily Afloat upon garden pond Spring is dreamed anew. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Seems someone not only has spring fever but that she's also been taken by Haiku.....wonderful posts |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Fever emoting Spring cannot be far behind Ah ! Spring is Haiku ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
~Marge~ Color of Rainbows dabbles of life giving hues In gardens of rhyme... Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 03-04-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Parker* Flower blooms anew Opening petals to sun Petals close - day done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
~Marge~ Sleep welcomes sweet rest Night rejuvinates the Soul Bright thoughts for new day. Parker |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
I love it Marge! It's so precious  .~Susie~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
In slumber rested Dreams create short reverie 'Morrow dawns within. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-04-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Precious angel flies Wings a'flutter when passing Angel wings bring Spring. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-04-2000).] |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
Wonderful, bright and cheery just like spring....I can't wait for the first day to burst into color and the earth to wake up from its winter slumber. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Spring the colors bright Within a rainbow of hues Cheerful song awaits. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-04-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Marge Little bird slips and falls "Don't be scared"smiles the mother bird Wings spread,both soar free |
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