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Spring Of Haiku

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Marge Tindal
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Singing of feather
Trilling in warmth of the spring
Look! Out on the lawn!


~*Marge*~


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1 posted 03-04-2000 05:07 PM       View Profile for sonjes   Email sonjes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sonjes

Now it is time to all haiku.  Ah, spring, robins, hummingbirds, wonderful thoughts!
Thank-you, Marge.

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Don't give up and use the chance
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Marge, very lovely and so visual and funny.

Parker
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I love this--it is enchanting!
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4 posted 03-04-2000 06:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is adorable, Marge!!   Precious!

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 03-04-2000).]
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Marge,
A charming haiku, enjoyed. *L*
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Love it, Marge!

hehe. The first time I read it I didn't notice the exclamation mark after Look!....gave the poem a whole new meaning!  
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Sonjes~
Springing forth with thoughts
Hummingbird on wing flutters.
Heartbeat away - Spring.


Parker~
Funny are the thoughts
Spring will bring to many men
Heart touched by woman.


Martie~
Enchanting love thoughts
Blossom within the springing
Seeds of love winging.


Denise~
Spring adorable
Thoughts are brought to precious bloom
Spring is upon us.



Seymour~
Charms of Spring, spring forth
Renewing ancient legends
Nature awakens.



Balladeer~
Spring of the heart's beat
Awakening thoughts of love
Welcome, heart of Spring.
~*Marge*~



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I see I'm not the only one with spring fever, this is lovely Marge I could here that birdie tweeting away.
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LostDreamer~
Spring birds sing sweetly
Songs of Spring about them fly
Springing lullabies.
~*Marge*~


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A little birdie told me that the sun would shine
I thought I new that little birdie stitting in the vine
Here i see the birdie again today
Telling me that you have send it out my way
Your poem is little like the bird above
For such nice poem I thank you so much my Dove


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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Helmut~
Turtle Dove of Spring
Winging thoughts straight to your heart
Springing forth with love.
~*Marge*~


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wow,i'm impressed--i especially like your 1st one cos i can just imagine this bird chirping away in my lawn,singing its song,as happy as it can be....

Having just introduced to Haiku,nevertheless,i can't seem to write anything worthwhile.here's the only thing i can come up with so far

Composing

My pen on my lips
My face scowling in a frown
Will I ever write?

i guess i'm rude to post this under your topic but i do want to share this with another Haiku fan.Haiku seems so simple yet your skill must be terrific to be able to indulge in it.Agreed?')
do comment ")
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Kaile~
Spring does spring in thought
Eternally feathering
Perfect partners verse.
~*Marge*~


*Hi there.  What you see in my post
my first attempt at Haiku.  I think
it's done correctly, and if not then
someone more versed will surely let me know.

I do know that Haiku is originally a Japanese poetry style done in a syllabic standard of 5-7-5 ...
is supposed to be about nature or things
of wonder.  

Keep studying the technique if it appeals to you.  
I would suggest reading up on it a bit.
I was just inspired by a few that I saw here and plunged in
(after reading a few guidelines).

Good luck.  I'll play with it from time to time ... but my forte is rhyme.
Will look for yours in the future.
E-mail me if you want some help ...
but, believe me ... I'm a novice !


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~Marge~
Lilly of the Pond
Splashing in vibrant color
Painter of the dream.
*Parker*
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*Parker*
Lotus of lily
Afloat upon garden pond
Spring is dreamed anew.
~*Marge*~



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Seems someone not only has spring fever but that she's also been taken by Haiku.....wonderful posts  
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Hoot~
Fever emoting
Spring cannot be far behind
Ah ! Spring is Haiku !
~*Marge*~


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~Marge~
Color of Rainbows
dabbles of life giving hues
In gardens of rhyme...

Parker




[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 03-04-2000).]
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*Parker*
Flower blooms anew
Opening petals to sun
Petals close - day done.
~*Marge*~




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~Marge~
Sleep welcomes sweet rest
Night rejuvinates the Soul
Bright thoughts for new day.

Parker

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I love it Marge! It's so precious  .

 ~Susie~

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*Parker*
In slumber rested
Dreams create short reverie
'Morrow dawns within.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com           



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-04-2000).]
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Angel~
Precious angel flies
Wings a'flutter when passing
Angel wings bring Spring.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com           



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-04-2000).]
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Wonderful, bright and cheery just like spring....I can't wait for the first day to burst into color and the earth to wake up from its winter slumber.

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