wow,i'm impressed--i especially like your 1st one cos i can just imagine this bird chirping away in my lawn,singing its song,as happy as it can be....
Having just introduced to Haiku,nevertheless,i can't seem to write anything worthwhile.here's the only thing i can come up with so far
My pen on my lips
My face scowling in a frown
Will I ever write?
i guess i'm rude to post this under your topic but i do want to share this with another Haiku fan.Haiku seems so simple yet your skill must be terrific to be able to indulge in it.Agreed?')
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