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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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My Choice I greet the radiant warmth with a passion. Feeling it softly penetrate the delicateness of my face. My choice of desire is to comfortably worship what some say may kill. So I close my eyes gently and tilt my head to face it directly, it may kill me someday but today it gave me life. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Gloria! Hey, didn't you hear that now 'they' are saying that a little bit of sunbathing without sunscreen can actually produce a chemical in you that prevents skin cancer? So maybe it's not harmful after all! Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ Ahhhhhh ! With you I celebrate the rays. Wonderfully warm upon my skin. Yeah, rejuvenation. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This is wonderfull. The body does need some sunshine, contrary to what coppertone might say. Its been the giver of life for billions of years, it would have killed us off long ago if it was that bad. I say worship it un-protected, in moderation with minimal clothing or none at all (my choice). I tan therefore I am, Parker the man......  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling...so you took my advice and got some fresh air...you playing the part of the sun goddess today ?  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I had my screen glowing today. It must have been you, because we only had hail and rain over here today  Good poem, as always |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Everything in moderation...and there is nothing like a touch of sun to give a feeling of peace and hope... great! 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your writing is always so beautiful Liz |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I Thank You all so very much for your kind responses, I can't believe I let this slip so far before responding, please forgive this lady who must be losing her mind. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A good friend tells me that sunshine and smiles make the world go around. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is really a smooth write. I think some can take more sun than others...but some don't know when to get out of the heat and they look like they were baked in the oven. James |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Awesome work, Gloria - immense depth to this piece. Well done. michael |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sunshine - On my shoulders makes me happy... so does this poem..   |
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