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just_another_fe
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MICHIGAN


0 posted 03-04-2000 02:03 AM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

You say that i don't love you
If you only knew
The only difference between our love
Is that mine is true.
As the tears run down my cheek
I can't help but wonder why?
You keep on breaking my heart.
Do you like to see me cry?
You said that i'm a hater
but i don't see why.
What makes me a hater?
The fact that i don't lie.
I was only trying to be real
thats what you claim to be.
I've always looked at you as that
but i have yet to see.
You say that i was wrong
forgive me if you will
this hurt and pain is to much
I think i've had my fill.


[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 03-05-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


1 posted 03-05-2000 06:57 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I see you are sorting out your feelings...I feel exactly the same about some things I've been going thru...."this hurt and pain is too much...I think I've had my fill."  Yes its time for me to go on to other things...like new friends and lovers.  James
mete out
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2 posted 03-06-2000 08:55 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

Although this poem displays your pain and heartache, it also shows me how strong a person you are.
Fantastic.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.
hoot_owl_rn
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A very powerful poem   You go girl!!!
just_another_fe
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4 posted 03-25-2000 04:30 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

yes it is james   thanks guyz
 
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