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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
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MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-03-04 02:03 AM


You say that i don't love you
If you only knew
The only difference between our love
Is that mine is true.
As the tears run down my cheek
I can't help but wonder why?
You keep on breaking my heart.
Do you like to see me cry?
You said that i'm a hater
but i don't see why.
What makes me a hater?
The fact that i don't lie.
I was only trying to be real
thats what you claim to be.
I've always looked at you as that
but i have yet to see.
You say that i was wrong
forgive me if you will
this hurt and pain is to much
I think i've had my fill.


[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 03-05-2000).]

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-03-05 06:57 AM


I see you are sorting out your feelings...I feel exactly the same about some things I've been going thru...."this hurt and pain is too much...I think I've had my fill."  Yes its time for me to go on to other things...like new friends and lovers.  James
mete out
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england
2 posted 2000-03-06 08:55 AM


Although this poem displays your pain and heartache, it also shows me how strong a person you are.
Fantastic.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 2000-03-06 10:10 AM


A very powerful poem   You go girl!!!
just_another_fe
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MICHIGAN
4 posted 2000-03-25 04:30 PM


yes it is james   thanks guyz
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