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Hail In A New Day

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Cerenity
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0 posted 03-03-2000 05:30 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cerenity

The sun is begging to rise,
I hear the birds many and
different. The chilled air hits
my flesh but is confronting.

An announcement is being hailed,
a new day has arrived go be
well and thrive. Nature has the
secrets to life no doomed songs
do birds sing no flower does
open because of fear.

But man has not learned this
trait of nature yet, they go
about hurring and blind passing
the chance to say I love you
to there mate, or give a greeting
of well being to there neighbor.

They proceed through the day
with no song for life, no joy
to be alive, no-announcement
they our truly blessed. The sun
does set and there is promise
of a repeat tomorrow.

But does man learn life's true
rhythms, no for he does not listen
to the very nature of life which
is so bountiful all around him.

Is there going to always be a
promise of a new day?


Cerenity
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Michael
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1 posted 03-03-2000 05:43 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Indeed, "man has not learned this trait yet",
Hopefull we will before there is not tomorrow.  Insightful poem, Cerenity-1.  Beautifully done.


Michael
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2 posted 03-03-2000 07:52 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Cerenity~
I like, like, like this.
Such beautiful imagery you've
cast at my feet.

'Is there going to always be a
promise of a new day?'

I can truly tell you .... YES !

The new day promise
rises on the rays of the sun.
Bringing awareness of peace-in-the-making
for us all.
Birds singing, breezes rustling the underbrush, flowers bursting forth
in new bloom.
Nature at her finest teaches us things
we could not otherwise know.
We do need to only listen and model
ourselves after her.
~*Marge*~



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Patrick B
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3 posted 03-03-2000 07:56 PM       View Profile for Patrick B   Email Patrick B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patrick B

I liked it..deep feelings

 hello darkness my old friend

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4 posted 03-03-2000 08:27 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

"No flower does open because of fear". This is an excellent line and the poem is full of them. Well done!
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I agree, Cerenity! This is wonderful! I love it!! Chock full of wisdom!!  

Denise
 
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