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End of a Golden State
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End of a Golden State |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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End of a Golden State Far above these reddish golden gates, a shimmering northern reflection plays, along the rivers and silent bays finally running into the sea. But urban sprawl is blinding me. Where is home now, we wonder? We’ve searched this land, but no answers were found, we covered distances, calculated differences, tossed three coins to the wind, whispered prayers in the pre-dawn hours to find they never reached higher powers. It’s up to us to make our way now. Although I admit to being afraid, I won’t let fear stand in the way. So, plunge into a sea of change, all will fall into the space, and into the time God has predestined. Nothing can change that. I pray for you, too, love, and think your name, as I drift into fitful dreams of tomorrow. © 2000 CMB |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This is beautiful Corinne ... if we let fear stand in our way this world would not exist  Rex}<{{{{o> I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
A wonderful poem Corinne! As usual very thought provoking..... Marina |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Change is usually not easy. Often it is scarey. Your poem reflects that and ends on a note of Divine Providence. I like that! Well done, Corinne! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...what an ending on this one...nicely done |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, It seems that change just never ends, I look forward to the day to rest from some of its challanges. On the other hand change brings a newness to life and washes away the tired past. So here's to you and a sweet new future, so dive into the sea and remember the buddy system, swim with a friend. Parker |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ So deep an ocean couldn't hold all your emotion. This is just wonderful. Pensive. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Rex, Marina. Denise, Hoot, Parker and Marge for your kind words! Corinne |
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