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chic
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since 01-26-2000
Posts 255
yellville, Ar, U.S.


0 posted 03-03-2000 09:37 AM       View Profile for chic   Email chic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for chic


You are my Father
Why do you do this?
I am your daughter.
Is something amiss?

You touch me
not as a Father should
I want to tell someone
If only I could

If I tell
I'll lose my family
If I do not
It'll stay with me

You say you love me
yet I know better.
You have now placed on me
a scarlet letter.


 "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me!
© Copyright 2000 Barbara Mendoza - All Rights Reserved
mete out
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since 02-16-2000
Posts 273
england


1 posted 03-03-2000 10:38 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Chic
As promised I have checked out some more of your work....this is what I came across.
I am so sorry. You are on the floor and you obviously need picking up. You are, to a certaiin extent, doing this yourself by expressing yourself in your poems.
Keep on writing and keep on fighting.
Feel free to mail me if you want to keep in touch.
Love Louise   xxx


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.
Mistikman
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since 01-10-2000
Posts 729
San Jose, CA, USA


2 posted 03-03-2000 10:50 AM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

This is sad and well written chic. Feel better... I would take the path of telling others if I were you, but that is only the way I think. You see the situation in a way I can not.
Danny Holloway
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since 01-15-2000
Posts 2072
Tulsa, OK


3 posted 03-03-2000 10:51 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

The piece is good but the content is sad and bothersome I must say.  Don't see how you can continue in that environment.  Hope there is someone that you can talk to about this and get help.  Don't understand why you would lose your family if this is not revealed.  There must be love there somewhere.  Hope it works out.  If you want an e-mail friend, count me in.
Good luck.
chic
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since 01-26-2000
Posts 255
yellville, Ar, U.S.


4 posted 03-03-2000 10:57 AM       View Profile for chic   Email chic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for chic

mete out-thanx for ur support i'll take u up on that e-mail offer if that's ok

mistikman- though u are far away, you are a good friend thanx

danny- i just feel as though if I tell what's going on...my family will seperate and I don't want that.  I'm bascially torn to pieces with this.


 "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me!
infinat3 sadn3ss
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since 02-14-2000
Posts 86
somerset england


5 posted 03-04-2000 04:02 PM       View Profile for infinat3 sadn3ss   Email infinat3 sadn3ss   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for infinat3 sadn3ss

um....thank god (why?) i have never been in that position . i know it may not help but i am truly sorry . you are very brave to alloow your poetry to be viewed and you have my upmost respect . thankyou very much .
 
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