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tracie66
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0 posted 2000-03-03 05:20 AM



Zen

I know a fairy who's name is Zen
Be nice to him and he'll show you his den

Deep in the forest is a den or two
In a far away place you never knew

It's green and lush with unusual sounds
And through the bushes small creatures bound

With wonderful noises and sensuous smells
There's other fairies with tinkering bells

They fly around just out of sight
And only apear in the still of night

For they have secrets never told
Some are astounding, some very bold

Thats why they live far far away
And deep in the forest their secrets lay

Only to some do they show their wings
And on flower petals you'll here them sing

So if you hear a fairy sing
You know that it's a sacred thing

Listen carefully, keep an eye out
And if you see one never shout

They keep to themselves, always wary
This is the way of the fairy




 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
mete out
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1 posted 2000-03-03 10:59 AM


Absolutely gorgeous!
I'd love to have a fairy show me it's wings....
I love the descriptions too....cool.

bobbycat
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2 posted 2000-03-03 02:37 PM


Ah...I remember reading this one now.....very beautiful and descriptive.     Thank you so much for reposting it for me.  

Bobbycat =^..^=


 ~~Blessed Be!~~

tracie66
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3 posted 2000-03-03 05:01 PM


You're both very welcome, I'm glad you both enjoyed it. I wrote it for my daughter a few years ago xx  

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-03-03 08:10 PM


Oh, Tracie~
This is just wonderful.
Light, lithe and lovely.

~*Marge*~



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tracie66
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5 posted 2000-03-04 02:50 AM


Marge thanks for your kind reply I always look forward to them  

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

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