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~ Put on the Coffee ~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Put on the Coffee ~~~ Early one morning at the break of dawn all snug and warm my pajamas were gone ~ Like spoons in a drawer I snuggled in close she said let me up my kidneys afloat ~ The moment she left I drifted right off to sounds of the ocean its' breeze gentle soft ~ Welcome aboard the slumberland cruise lip locked with my wife who else would I choose ~ When I finally decided to surface for air a much younger wife stood next to me there ~ We were both young again with new fire in our stare her breath the sweet essence of fresh country air ~ With passions aroused we fled below deck into each each others arms my lips pressed to her neck ~ Her passion grew stronger her tongue did I taste her kisses were wet and covered my face ~ Her moans sounded odd and most out of place I opened my eyes our dogs' snout in my face ~ I guess I'm not needed came a laugh through my glower I'll put put on the coffee while you take a shower ~~~ I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~ The coffee is brewing ! Been 'kissed' by the pup of youth, eh? You old dog you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Roars laughter Well done, just what I needed to read after a long hard day at work...thanks rex  enjoyed it tremendouslyKeep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Well, it's a good thing you can tell the "oddness" of a moan! HAHAHA! This is truly hillarious! Myself, drawn in by the title, 'cause I sure need some coffe at 5am...but the outcome was even better! Guess all I really needed was the laughs. Now I think I'm relaxed enough to catch some more z's before dawn. GREAT POEM! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well, at least the dog had a bright start to his day....Cute, Rex... Very cute..  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
ROFL...I'd be a brushing my teeth a bit too ...LOL  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Glad to see the right dog is in control of the situation...the one that always remains loyal to the end. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Rex Allen McCoy, Yep the word coffee sent me right to this place of laughter and joy, Thanks, Cerenity |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And I thought waking up to kitty meows of "I'm hungry" was bad! LOL. Thanks for the grins! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROFL  This is wonderfully hillarious, Rex!! Denise |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Marge ... The family joke is to bring the dog in every morning to wake me and the dog just plays the part like she knows she is entertaining tracie ... happy to have made you roar January Flowers ... I think the laughter from the peanut gallery helped me to catch on Nan ...The dog is a dear friend ... but not that dear hoot_owl_rn ... Brush? ... not til after I kissed the wife good-moring! Sunshine ... heh ...I'm loyal too ya know Cerenity-1 ... thankyou for reading ... I like to entertain suthern ... heh I can let you borrow the dog for a morning or two Denise ... You keep rolling on the floor ...are you by chance ... Pennicostal? I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
With a name like Rex whadaya expect? Love the writing! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
OMG! This is just what I needed after this long hectic day at work! Thanx lots |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Balladeer ... thankyou ... I enjoyed writing this ... knowing it would bring smiles passing shadows ... Glad you took time to read this poem ... thankyou |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Laughter you do bring and it's so delightful. Your wife is smart she knew just the right moment to let that dog in so you didn't get lost in your dream...LOL |
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